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Pretty! ^_^

But, uhh... his/her/its beak looks a little weird. It's long about and kinda uneven. I would personally suggest it be a little shorter and straighter. Also, is its eye suppose to make it look angry? If so, then you did you good job with it, but if not, you may want to fix it. ^^; It looks upset!

Otherwise, I thought it was nice. Nice and colorful. ^_^ Some of the better art critiques may say differently, seeing as how I don't know a snatch about drawing.

Best wishes!

~*Syd*~

Hey, it's not bad.

The beak is a little bumpy, true, but it's not that bad.

I like the feathers on the chest. They're pretty.

Keep up the good work.

Really nice colors. It's body looks a little stumpy though...... Kinda like its too short for it's width.

I like it though! Its interesting.

Truthfully, I like it, but the bird looks kind of awkward. Like it's squished, or flat, or something.

It's really not bad. It really helps that it's a fantasy bird though because there isn't really a set boundary for it. I love the colors!

I would like to see more definite lines. Stronger, less squiggly...you know, that kind of thing. More...birdlike? Hehe.

I would also like to see some foliage and such in the background. It's kind of boring on the white!

thanks

i drew this at about 14 years of age i'm 17 now

Hehe... I like the little ruff that goes down the side of his head. It looks like sideburns.

Overall, he looks like a little bald schoolmaster or something. I dunno... But I like the colors. He just looks so prim sitting there. Like he's full of himself almost.

Great job.

~GryphonFledgling

yea he's supposed to be mad looking lol vain actually


and i made his head bigger than his body because i found the idea by looking at toucans.

That's pretty good. I think you could work more on shading and making him look 3D, because right now he's a little flat lol. Maybe try working with the feathers to make it look like it's poking out of the page?

Good work overall, though, I love the colors and the head is really nice.

~Azila~

I liek the idea and the shape, but I think it looks to flat and boring. The colours make it a bit tacky, I think you could work on that.

Keep drawing!

~D'Aedomir~