Young Writers Society

Removed By Firearris

Um...I really don't know what to say. If you were going for realistic, you failed miserably. Her arms are not postitioned like a real person would postition them, her hands are a bit, shall we say, mushed and crumpled, and her face is ill porportioned. The words on the mug have seemed to 'magically' move around her fingers so you can read them.

Not to be rude FireArris, but it also failed in cartoons. Even though cartoons can be drawn anyway you want and are basically a free-style art method, it still didn't live up to the basic standard. Did you draw this on your computer? It seems a bit pixilish.

I have to disagree with Mad. I personally think that this is well done for being drawn on a computer. Drawing on the computer is hard to work with when making pictures, but I think you did a pretty good job. ^_^ Sure it's not the perfect piece of art, but it's pretty good, considering you used a mouse.

Nice work.

~*Sydney*~

I agree with Silly Sydtix 100% Keep on drawing! That's brilliant for 10, infact I think the skull is fantastic!

It's pretty good for a paint drawing! That is hard to do.

However, I have to agree with the realistic ( or lack of ) part of it. Try drawing something on paper instead of on paint, it's much easier plus you can make your own rules!

I think its amazing for a ten year old! Specially on a computer! Very well done. I can see you becoming a great artist when you are older. Keep at it. Next stop... shading!

If you would like to practice... the perfect object is something round, go somewhere with a tad of light, don't go somewhere to light or you won't get a strong enough contrast.


Remember folks, she's only ten. A lot of you probably can't or couldn't produce that at her age, give her some credit. I adore it, she has a style which is a lot like my sisters.

awesomeness!