Young Writers Society

It's line drawing. They're all of my left hand, except on is my little sister's, and another is my Mom's. Guess which? I still have the pencil version, so any comments are welcome. I think I need a hand coming in from the left, over lapping the big, giant hand. I'm pretty sure I do, but where and how? Thanks!

Oh. An explanation on the big hand coming in from the top right corner. I really hate that hand, but our picture had to deliver a message in more than one way. One had to be explicit, the other where the viewer had to find it. So, being a zombie on the morning this was due, I drew in a big cheesy hand to make up for lack of message.

And if any of you can 'read', you might find my signature in there. This is the picture of the inked version. Like I said, still have the pencil.

I have noticed that this has sign language with in it.
Very creative.
Uniquie(sp?). lol
Anyways, I look foward to viewing your other peices of work.

Its cool.
I am currently very obsessed with hands. Especially long graceful ones... I mean.
I think you should keep going maybe add some colour. Let your senses guide you. Or it wont turn out!

Very interesting choice in Art, Dreamer. I think this is pretty cool, and I'm going to take a wild guess that your sister's hand is... whichever one is the smallest hand in the picture. lol I'm not really sure.

Keep up the good work!

~*Syd*~

I have the very odd urge to high-5 the screen. *does so*

Your mum's hand is the... biggest? Meh. I know nothing.

Anyway, you draw good hands! I understand they're really hard to do. But I think you've done a pretty good job!

-Saint Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate

I've only ever attempted to draw a perfect hand once and it didn't turn too bad but these are really great, I wish I could read sign language. I liked the big hand overlapping the others.

I love this! I like how the larger hand covers the others! Very creative!

~Lulu

Ooo I really like this! Very creative. I couldn't draw a hand if my life depended on it and here you have so many. 0.0 Great job.

If you are looking to add another hand, a larger one, I suggest bringing it in from the lower right area of the piece, for their seems to be more negative space in this area than in the rest of the piece.

The idea is very unique, and well done as well.

Some of the hands could stand to be touched up, for a few of them look rather impossible in their articulation. Look them over, using your hand as a model once more, and figure out where you have gone wrong. With enough time staring at yourt hand, you should find your mistakes.

--ME