Young Writers Society

NOTE: This picture is small because it was originally posted on deviantART.com as an emoticon. DeviantART's emoticons usually are below a 50x50 pixel size. Also, deviantART has a rather darker color scheme, and so that is why the wording may be hard to read on YWS because it is rather bright.

It's very small so it's hard to see any of the finer detail but it's not a bad cartoon. I think the text is hard to read in that colour and it might have been better to have the figure leaning over a piece of paper and have the words appear there rather than on his t-shirt.

The actual animation is cool, but I think the wording is inappropriate for a Young Writers Society. I agree with Kitty that it'd be cool to have the wording appear on a piece of paper.

Wow, I thought that was cute! Even if it did have a naughty word (**giggles**) on it.

Well done!

Make more!

I don't like the colour of the word 'coloring' - it's too yellow for the background its against. Perhaps make it something that stands out more?

Your detail and pose is good. In particular, I like the way you've done the mouth and teeth.

You should have him writing it on the paper! We don't need his face, just his hand writing it!

Cute idea.

I agree with kitty15, it is too small, but pretty funny.-Jeni

Mantis wrote:The actual animation is cool, but I think the wording is inappropriate for a Young Writers Society. I agree with Kitty that it'd be cool to have the wording appear on a piece of paper.

Yes the word is rather explict and that is why I put it under the PG-13 category because in the rules for posting (although for Literature instead of photos) that I have to post PG-13 for curse words. Also, the reason it is small (I forgot to explain this in the main post and I will edit it so it says so) is because it is meant to be a deviantART emoticon which tend to be smaller then 50x50 pixel size. Also, because of dA's different coloring scheme, I had to have the white and yellow coloring for the words so they could be read clearly and accurately.

I must of been absent-minded when I made this emoticon because I should of done the paper thing that you guys were suggesting. I'd redo it but since making it I switched drawing systems and I'm afraid I can't redo the picture without the paper looking out of place.

I really liked it...even with the bad word on there. But, you did the right thing by rating it PG-13 so I don't see a problem with it. I agree with Mantis and Heather. You should really have it appear on the paper. Otherwise I don't see any problems with it.