Young Writers Society

These are all doodles that I found in my notebook while cleaning it out. I thought I'd put them up because 2007 is ending and these are the last pictures I'll put up this year. Since these are all doodles ('cept the last one which I'm still working on) they aren't all that good, done in class quickly while I'm bored of listening to the teacher talk. Enjoy ^.^

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Number 4 and 5 are character for my story "A Hidden Sanctuary" the 15 year old one is for the first book, and the "one year later" is her in the sequel. I like to draw my characters and do pages like this where they are in different scenarios (I have a story for each picture XD) Enjoy Toki Zanza, the main character of "A Hidden Sanctuary" ^.^

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You have an interesting style XD I'm watching Pretty Woman at the moment, so the drawings reminded me a bit of Julia Roberts' character in the movie heh. I'm assuming you've posted the story on YWS, so I'll have to look it up some time

Cheers,
~bubbles

The last one looks soooooo cool! I love the falling shapes! It's wow worthy. It feels like a story's going on in it or somethings happening. It brings a whole new meaning to 'a picture's worth a thousand word', you know? It's SO cool!

They all look cool, come to think of it.The writing doesn't show up very well on m computer, but I'm guessing this is a character for your story? The last one, though... I want to know what's happening there! It looks like it would be a cool story.

Hey, LAF! I love these! Your drawing style is unique and different, which makes your characters all the more awesome. I especially liked #'s 2, 3 (her pose is awesome), 4, and 7. Nice job, and keep it up!

-Mays

I think these drawings are great. they's be even better if you added color.

They are all pretty okay. I think I would like them better if they were finished. My favorite one is the little girl, though she has no hands or feet?

A couple suggests:

Avoid random lines and finish incomplete ones. I really have no idea what some of these lines (especially with the arms) go to and they are really just distracting. Plus hands and feet are generally a good concept to use when drawing people

Remember that people aren't stiff boards. We have tons of curves (some good, most bad, but all the same curves) and I can't remember the last time I saw someone stand perfectly straight without being told to. A little body language goes a long way!

They are more than doodles, they are art work!Very beautiful!But, on the first few dozen drawings, shading on the outlines of the clothes is too light for the shading done on the bodies, but very beautiful.-Jeni