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Tue Dec 18, 2007 9:21 pm
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Tue Dec 18, 2007 9:29 pm
Stori says...



Nice picture. Do the characters have names?
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i called the doode Garrow and the girl Hina (after Hinata in Naruto)
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Hmm. The colours are a little dull, but that could just be the quality of the image. An interesting pic. I like the effect of the orange circles - looks like sun glinting on the camera lens or something.

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Wed Jan 02, 2008 7:43 am
cynicalgurl says...



Water colors?

Very pretty. The quality of the picture could be better (as in, how it shows up on the computer) but other than that, its nice. I like Hina the best. :)
  





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Fri Jan 04, 2008 12:49 am
Via says...



The colors definitely do need to be bolder, I agree. The main issue I see with that is the guy seems to be hold his upper half in the air? But I can't really tell if that's what is SUPPOSED to be happening or not...its just what I see?

I actually really like how he is elongated, though, which is odd for me to say. If there was a way to make the girl have the same appearance that would be great!

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