Hmm. The colours are a little dull, but that could just be the quality of the image. An interesting pic. I like the effect of the orange circles - looks like sun glinting on the camera lens or something.
The colors definitely do need to be bolder, I agree. The main issue I see with that is the guy seems to be hold his upper half in the air? But I can't really tell if that's what is SUPPOSED to be happening or not...its just what I see?
I actually really like how he is elongated, though, which is odd for me to say. If there was a way to make the girl have the same appearance that would be great!
The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties. — Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians
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