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Wed Dec 12, 2007 9:02 am
Ego says...



Pencils only--inks coming soon.

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Wed Dec 12, 2007 12:13 pm
Via says...



Well, I don't really have much to nit-pick on. Normally I would say "do it in ink instead of pencil" but you've already covered that. Mmm...I love the hands and feets, those make my day....though I do wonder how he stands without falling over.

Oh! I would make the design on the "thigh sheilds" a bit darker and possibly clean up on the lines on the face/head/facemask thingy. That one curved one coming how looks about 50% like it's supposed to be there.
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Wed Dec 12, 2007 8:57 pm
Myth says...



Just wonderful. I can't wait to see the inked version. He seems to have chicken-ish legs though.
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Thu Dec 13, 2007 7:16 pm
Crysi says...



This thing is awesome! I love the detail on the guns and the armor, and the shape of the body is awesome. Very detailed, very cool. I'm thinking this is gonna be a pretty awesome storybook. :)
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Thu Dec 13, 2007 10:58 pm
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Ooh, nifty. That's what you were talking about on MSN. *nods*

I can't wait for the storybook to get started! It'll be awesome. ;)

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Fri Dec 14, 2007 3:55 am
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O ma gosh, I absolutely love it. I really like the armour design. It gives it a sort of mystical quality. Guns are brilliant, very sweet. My only nit pick is the right foot. I think it should be a little straighter. Of course It's bloody gorgeoous anyway. *distracted by the awesomeness*
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Sun Dec 16, 2007 1:39 am
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Just the fact you're drawing makes me smile, man. Since I've been playing Mass Effect for days, this excites me. His upper right arm seems a bit funkily placed above the other though. Otherwise, awesome.
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Mon Dec 17, 2007 3:32 am
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Meh, I printed out a copy and inked it, then forgot I couldn't just erase the leftovers -.- So it looks really crappy. I hate my inking job, but so many of you have asked for it...here you go.
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Mon Dec 17, 2007 1:36 pm
little.angelfire says...



*looks at inked picture, that at her own shaded pictures and her little adventure with charcoal that she got all over herself*

Wow, that's really good Hunter!! Of course, I say this because I can't ink...or do anything that doens't have to do with a pencil that isn't colored...but it looks really good!!

*hides links to her laaaame pictures*

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