Young Writers Society

tell me what you think...

Hmm, well...the sunlight is really awesome. But it's kind of a weird angle for the girl and it may look better had she not been there or had she been a statue in the garden or something like that? I have a serious issue with taking pictures of the sun without getting sunspots, though, so bravo on that point!

I like this picture, the sun is making the girl look faded though. I know it is hard to take pictures directly into the sun like this.

hummingbird

Nice.
Well... I think you should have taken her out farther like VIa said on the grass or something.
Good work

The sun looks really cool, but it does make the girl--is it you?--look faded. I like the trees but I don't think the girl should be leaning out as much.
Cheers,
Ayra

yeah its me. i got bored one day..
thanks for everyone comments.