This is very good! Of course, I have a few suggestions. The head is a little small for the width of the shoulders and the size of the chest. Also, try doing a pen instead of pencil? It just looks so much neater.
And, again, don't sign it there. Try the bottom corner...it's so distracting there!
I agree that his head is too small but the detail's great, especially on the clothes. Maybe work on having a larger range of shading to give it a bit more life and I'd quite like to see a full body drawing but in general, this is very nice.
I realize that the shading looks pretty lame on here, but try to remember that I have pretty much the worst scanner in the world. The shading is actually much more distinct. And, remember, I drew most of these a good five years ago. Basically every picture I post is going to have a similar signature. I know they look awful, but there's no use commenting on them; they're on everything I ever drew. It was my style at the time, what can I say. I mean, I agree with you completely, but, I'm not going to change something I did all those years ago. Should I pick up my -pencil- again, I will take your advice. . . . except about switching to pen. ~_^
Nice work.
I know that in the game he's got a small head... But I think you should make it a little bigger here. His hair is bigger than his head
The next step would be to add some colour!
This is really good, but I have some suggestions:
- The head does look a bit small, and his ears seem to be rather larger than I remember.
- The hair is kinda...big. Not pouffeh, just kind of voluminous in a stiff way.
But the details were excellent and I think the face was really well-drawn.
Keep drawing!
You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own. And you know what you know. And YOU are the one who'll decide where to go... — Dr. Seuss
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