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*grins*

Definitely, definitely Jo. Kick-butt and sexy. And basically, I want those boots. *laughs*

But hey, if I approve, that's all that counts. After all, she IS my character.

Very awesome. Thank you, Dono.

Love it! I'm starting to enjoy this pen art, no color thing. The only thing I'd like to point out is that where her left hand is holding the gun looks almost like the gun broke somewhere behind her body and she is holding two parts in separate hands. The left hand makes it look like the gun should be in front of her body and her right hand makes it look behind it, but only at the point of contact...the rest is great!!

That's fantastic! I think the face is a bit long and it might be better if her eyes were both looking in the same direction but it's really well drawn and I love the shading. You should do a coloured version. Also, there's some great detail on her clothes and the pose is perfect. Good work, Dono.

this is very good, i like the detail, you have the proportions right.
i have never been able to draw people, so i admire anyone who can.

excellent job.

kim

Nicely done, sir, nicely done indeed. Of all people named Donovan who have the nickname Hunter and post their artwork at YWS, you are definitely my favorite. The pen medium works very well for you, and I like the hatching and cross-hatching for shading effects.

Very good! The second one's best. For some reason, she has me thinking, "Now you're hip!"

I find that arms, hands, and legs are the hardest to draw, but you've done them flawlessly. The end of the gun, where she holds it in her right hand, almost looks like it's turned a corner around her hip instead of continuing in a straight line, but that might just be an optical illusion. And her left eye seems a little out of proportion. Lovely job, Hunter!

Brilliant! She looks kick butt. Great job on the inking. I really need to leanr how to do that. Grat Job Dono. She look perfect to me.

great picture, people are difficult to draw for me, I am impressed. The shading is great. The body is flawless and everything I must say is in perfect proportion. The black and white was a great choice.

Hummingbird

Wow, that looks like one tough lady.
The proportions were excellent and the details were very well-done. I agree with Via on the broken gun thing though but the rest is spiiftastic!
Cheers,
Ayra

Very nice work!
In the first picture the gun looked a little bit broken and then in the second it looks fine. But Her shoulders are a little bit to forwards for her posture. Ya know. Well the other thing that bothers me is her face. Its kinda broken up and the eyes are to big and kinda in the wrong place.
She kinda reminds me of the girl from Tomb Radar. Except her hair is not as messy looking.

Other than that nice work!

-Keep Drawing
Genevieve
xxx

Woo hoo, shmexy Jo! The boots are especially awesome, Dono dear. Nice work.

The final looks so much better than the first one, I love her boots.