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Sat Nov 03, 2007 5:55 pm
Knurla says...



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This is my niece. She loves to be the subject of my photos, but this is the only one I had since it was getting dark outside.
  





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Sat Nov 03, 2007 6:01 pm
Rydia says...



That's very creepy. I like the patch of light in the top corner but I think the tree should be more in focus. Great picture though and your niece is so cute!
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Sat Nov 03, 2007 6:04 pm
Via says...



I think the dark worked a little against you in this one. Because it's black and white, it's hard to do a 'dark' shot without it looking too dark for it's own good. I like the idea, though, maybe just lighten it up a little with an editing program?
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Sat Nov 03, 2007 6:33 pm
Jennafina says...



To me, it looks overly posed. I think I'd like it better if your sister was sitting down to have a picnic, or playing in the leaves, or at least not looking directly at the camera.

I like the setting a lot, though. It's very pretty, and it's really nice of your sister to let you take pictures of her. :)
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Sat Nov 03, 2007 6:46 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Actually, that's pretty cool. It looks sort of like a shot for a horror movie poster - one of the older ones, though. All it really needs is a guy with a bloodied chainsaw lurking in the corner.

But perhaps that's not what you were aiming for. Hm...

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Sat Nov 10, 2007 3:12 am
MadHatter says...



I like it. I think it's actually sort of creepy with your cousin not smiling and the whole thing black and white. I really think it's good.
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Sat Nov 10, 2007 3:23 am
Gwenevire says...



Its nice.
  





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Mon Nov 12, 2007 10:39 pm
Kim says...



i like how the black and white work together, the light shining through the trees really stands out. i didnt see creepy in this photograph, i got the feeling of being alone. almost sad.

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Mon Nov 12, 2007 10:54 pm
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It's a bit too dark, and I can't see it properally. :(
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Mon Nov 19, 2007 5:04 am
hummingbird says...



The black and white is always a nice touch. She looks very sweet sitting there. It might have helped to lighten the picture and maybe unblur her face a bit to be able to see her features.
The picture is not creepy, I like it. But then i am a fav of black and white

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Mon Nov 19, 2007 8:54 am
HybridHead says...



It's a good attempt but I don't exactly get the idea of this photo. I think that it'd be better if your niece looked away and if she did not block so much of the tree.
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Sun Dec 02, 2007 3:52 am
Monki says...



It's her NEICE for God's sake people! Get it right! Not her sister, not her cousin, her NEICE. Very nice work. :)
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Mon Dec 03, 2007 4:18 am
Teague says...



It's a bit out of focus, but I personally feel like it adds to the photo.

It's an eloquent shot, that much can be said. Although her face looks a little... off. I can't quite put my finger on exactly what's wrong with it. Sorry. Heh. *sheepish grin*

Anyway, I like it! I personally feel like you could crop out a bit of the tree, but hey, that one's up to you. :D

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Sat Dec 08, 2007 7:42 am
Wolf says...



It's kinda cool.
I like the kind of grey-sepia colouring but the tree should be more in focus. Your niece looks wicked though--she kind of has a lost expression on her face. Not emo, definitely not, but kind of lost soul-ish. If you know what I mean.
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Sat Dec 08, 2007 9:44 am
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I liked it. The black and white added a really nice touch, and the bit of light in the corner makes it really... scary.

Your niece looks older than seven, though. And her expression makes it even creepier.

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