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Mon Oct 29, 2007 9:09 pm
The Misfit Prince says...



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Cut my wrists, close me eyes, stab my heart, say your goodbyes X

Here i am, standing there, seeing you in all my prayers.
Take my hand, we'll run away, i love you is all ill say.
  





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Cut my wrists, close me eyes, stab my heart, say your goodbyes X

Here i am, standing there, seeing you in all my prayers.
Take my hand, we'll run away, i love you is all ill say.
  





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Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:13 pm
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The finger in the first bit looks a bit bulky...
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Mon Oct 29, 2007 10:34 pm
Via says...



I actually really love the detail in the first frame, it's the best yet. The pointed finger is a tad bulky, but it wouldn't ruin it in any way.
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 3:24 pm
Rydia says...



Yes, your detail is good in this one, especially that first frame. I think you need to add just a touch of shading and sketching to your backgrounds and the disembodied heads need some bodies but other than that it's quite well drawn. What's the guy holding in the bottom left image? It's a little hard to see. And the one to the right of that's very nice but add a little more shading?
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