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Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:20 am
Sponson Light says...



Its... called a signature.
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Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:39 am
Kim says...



thats ok cheeztoast, thank you

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Tue Nov 06, 2007 4:43 am
Kim says...



i just want to thank all of you for taking the time to look at my work and critique.

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Tue Nov 06, 2007 7:50 pm
Someguy says...



The colour is great, the detail, perfect. I really like this painting. Did you make this? If you did, wow I'm impressed.
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 2:11 am
Gwenevire says...



Oh my god! Its beautiful! You are an artist! I have always liked drawing by my art looks like a scribble compared to yours! I really like it!
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 12:38 pm
iQuippie says...



That's incredible! I wish I could paint like that >_<
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Fri Nov 09, 2007 12:57 pm
Zappy77 says...



Awsome picture, I could never paint like that!!!!!!! :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026 :smt026
There is actually nothing wrong with that picture because it's an awsome background and angle and it looks seriously real!!!!!


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Sun Nov 11, 2007 8:14 pm
xhalcyonx128 says...



wow, to be completely honest this is incredible, well done :-)
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Thu Nov 15, 2007 8:33 pm
AyumiGosu17 says...



Beautiful job! I can't find much to critique on or give tips for improvement. The shading is just right, the texture is fine, and the colors are as natural as they come. Keep up the good work!

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Sun Nov 18, 2007 5:35 pm
BigBadBear says...



holy cow! Kim, you didn't tell me you liked to paint!

This was like the best painting I have ever seen! The horns really caught my attention, and you chose the background perfectly! I absolutely loved it all!

Great job, Kim!

You are so versatile

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Mon Nov 19, 2007 1:57 pm
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Like what everyone has said, this is an awesome painting. Such detail. My honest opinion would be for the colour of the horns to be more different than the colour of the background. A person with bad vision might assume that the horns are translucent! Haha..so, yea. Change the colour of the background if you want too.
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Mon Nov 19, 2007 4:49 pm
canislupis says...



This is amazing!! Very realistic. I can't wait to see other paitings that you do. I wish I could paint like that....
  





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Tue Nov 27, 2007 11:08 pm
my_wonderwall says...



its good. you have talent so keep it up. though i must say that i usually dont like animal paintings. i also dont really like rams or things that look like that but that doesnt mean its not a good painting.
  





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Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:46 pm
Kim says...



thank you for your comments, i really appreciate it.
  








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