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Avies for Till: "Death Machine"



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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:19 am
Dream Deep says...



I was bored. They're not the best, but I ran out of time.


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1. Todesmaschine

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2. Optimistic Armin

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3. Compensation #1

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4. Compensation #2

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5. Compensation #3

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6. Compensation #4

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7. Halt

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8. Hedy's Thoughts

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9. Ludger #1

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10. Ludger #2

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Last edited by Dream Deep on Fri Oct 19, 2007 4:48 pm, edited 6 times in total.
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:25 am
Emerson says...



eeee



You make me happy XD Danke schon! mit liebe :D

These really are rather cool. ^_^ I love the use of the Hedwig quote. When I saw the hell one, I was hoping it was my Hell-and-German quote. *sigh* Oh well. And the hell better than Stalingrad thing? Hah, that's only better now that I've finished reading Auschwitz and know a bit more about the atrocious Red Army. >_>

ahhhh ich liebe dich.

Though, I do love the first one on Hell. The second just confuses me, I think "Tropics"? The idea of "inevitable hell" just makes me squee.
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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:34 am
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Ah, I was trying to fit the Hell-and-German quote in there, but the spacing was being difficult. Same with the tropics one: there was something about the Polish winter and Armin not liking the cold. XD
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:37 am
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Am I going to have to write that in now...? XD

LUDGER: I wish they gave us more Vodka, I've already drank all of mine.
ARMIN: I wish I was in the tropics...
LUDGER: Why?
ARMIN: It's hot there!
LUDGER: how do you know that?
ARMIN:...

hee hee.
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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:43 am
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You should. *nods sagely*


^_^



[Added more of Armin's imagined compensations, just for you.]
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:45 am
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Really. The one about Ludger. That's so... entirely true. XD hahahhaha. I love you! You seem to understand my novel already. And finally, German and hell! I will use one in November, certainly. :) Danke, danke, danke, und danke!
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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:51 am
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Bitteschön. ^_^
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 3:01 am
Leja says...



I got a kick out of "optimistic Armin" and the Compensation list :D
  





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Wed Oct 10, 2007 1:03 pm
Myth says...



I love number nine =]
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Wed Oct 10, 2007 2:57 pm
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Thanks you two.

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Wed Oct 10, 2007 5:50 pm
Someguy says...



Leave the Nazis alone!!!!
Hehehehehehehe!

Really cool. 8)
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Thu Oct 11, 2007 8:17 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Is Till the Death Machine or are the avatars the death machine?

Peace, love, chocolate,
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Thu Oct 11, 2007 10:28 pm
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Haha, the avies are The Death Machine. Which, coincidentally, is the name of Till's NaNo. I suppose I should have clarified in the title...? XD
  





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Sat Oct 13, 2007 4:59 am
Caligula's Launderette says...



Ooooo!

Yeah, #5 makes my day. It's so hilariously wunderbar!
Fraser: Stop stealing the blanket.
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Thu Dec 06, 2007 12:41 am
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^_^



Thanks, Kelle.
  








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