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Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:30 pm
Frederick101 says...



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the first one is some evil guy i drew, the second is just some halloween monster thing.
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Fri Oct 05, 2007 10:34 pm
iQuippie says...



:D this is great. Im not great at critiquing artwork (or anything, for that matter), but I like em lots. Especially the Halloween one. He's cool/creepy!
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:54 am
EnchantressMuffin says...



I like the Halloween dude. He's pretty cute, in a skeletal, I'll-kill-you-in-your-sleep kind of way.

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Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:23 am
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I'm not an artist but I really liked your halloween dude. Your armoured dude just lacked the realistic stuff (or at least in my opinion it did.)
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:31 am
Bella says...



The halloween one is really great, in my opinion. The armor dude looks like a character out of Deltora Dragons...just something I noticed. I drew something exactly like that out of a how to draw Deltora Dragons book...

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Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:08 am
Via says...



I really like the armored dude. As I say with most drawings like this, I would like too see it with some color. The creepy guy is creepy, I suppose, but it kind of reminds me of a watered down nightmare before christmas?
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:37 am
Teague says...



I love the second one. Reminds me of Nightmare Before Christmas (<3).

The first one's face looks weird, but otherwise looks good. :D

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Sat Oct 06, 2007 4:34 am
Alteran says...



These are really cool. I like the skeleton guy the best. I think the knight's chest plate should be extended a little more the right. It looks a little off. Nice drawings.
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 11:02 am
Myth says...



I really like the top one. I think the second one has his head too large but being a hallowe'en guy that ought to be right.
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:53 pm
Frederick101 says...



well i did sort of model his jacket after jack skelington, but the rest i did on my own.
thanks for the comments
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 1:57 pm
Rydia says...



I love how detailed these are! The shading could be improved but they're very well drawn. The second one's shoes are different sizes and the first one might look better with some colour and a more detailed rock to stand on but in general, they're really good.
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 2:07 pm
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the second one's shoe on the left is supposed to be facing away, therefore looking smaller, but i can understand.
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Sat Oct 06, 2007 3:52 pm
Saphira says...



I like the armored guy. The shading is good but i think that it would look good with some colour.

The second guy is cool and very creepy. I think that it could be more detailed but the neck and the face is brilliant.
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