Some of the lines are a little rough but it's really cute! And that is one awesome hair style. If you want to make it scary, the eye will certainly have to be changed, the beak would need to be sharper and perhaps have the feet a little more pointed? But to be honest, I like her as a cute penguin!
Poems were like people. Some people you got right off the bat. Some people you just don't get - and never would get. — Benjamin Alire Saenz, Aristotle and Dante Discover the Secrets of the Universe
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