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Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:17 pm
EmiSukotto16 says...



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Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:34 pm
Knurla says...



This one's great, Jess!
I love how the MP3 player has almost the same thing on the screen!
Beautiful!!
  





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Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:26 am
Empress Kat says...



I think you should have found "prettier" sheet music. Maybe piano? Or just something with less numbers... i think music is the only universal language. And I don't like the picture on the mp3 player. But the compositing is great! I like your photos, they're classy stock photos
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:43 am
Sohini says...



Wow that's truly artistic.
I love the way you've fused old, classic music by the staff notatiion notebook with the modern CD and the player...works really well.
the theme's great in black and white and your focusing is very clear. A perfect photograph.
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 2:46 pm
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I love it. Everything should be about music. (in my life!) :lol:

I just want to know.
Is the timing on the book.
3
4 ?

You know. 1 2 3/ 1 2 3 /1 2 3/ 1 2 3.
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 7:20 pm
Rydia says...



This is really good. The objects are well placed, the black and white is very effective and it's a really interesting, intriguing photo. The white line in the background on the right is a little distracting but nothing major and I love how the CD reflects the light. Good work.
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Thu Sep 27, 2007 11:30 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Whoa... this is beautiful. I love how everything looks so natural and unposed. It's not like it was purposely set there at all.

Great job. :)

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Fri Sep 28, 2007 3:31 am
Alteran says...



I love it. I like the flow from the sheet music to the CD and then to the mp3 player. Black and white, gotta love it. This is a very high quality picture too. I love the way the CD looks in black and white. *wonders what the next theme will be.*
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Fri Sep 28, 2007 6:51 pm
Myth says...



These seem to have been placed randomly. I do like how you have three forms of playing music: the sheet, a CD and the iPod [or mp3]. Black and white works well for the photo, so good choice.
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Sun Sep 30, 2007 4:50 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



This is great :) I love the way the CD looks in black and white.


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Sun Sep 30, 2007 8:19 pm
kirstybree says...



I love this. I like the mixing of classic and modernt!
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