Young Writers Society

Heaven's Doorway



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Pilgrims & A Parasol

Wow I really like these. It seems like they tell a story. The first one is my favorite just because of the perfect and angle and the light, I love the second one too. Tell me when you post more! Great job!

~Rieda

These are fantastically beautiful; I love the way the light streams from the sky and sprays all over everything... it's like the photograph has been touched with a golden finger.

That sounded a little weird.

Oh, well. Great job, and I'm glad to see you're back on posting. Will you be on chat anytime?

Peace, love, chocolate.

Muffin

Those a brilliant! I love the use of the oight and the symbolisim of the ground and oorway to heavan was wonderful. The second one is really cool to, i love the parasol, the lighting from it is very nice.

Overall, these are both awesome. my only suggestion is in the first pic, the light bends oddly near the right hand corner, you might want to crop it. Just my thought.

The second one is weird and looks like it was photoshopped poorly, so I don't really like it as much. That, and frankly the parasol looks a bit too idolistic. However, the first one is creepy and pretty at the same time. Nice stuff!

Both of these are really good. The first one is creepy but mysterious at the same time which makes it seem like there is a story behind it. The only thing i can think of is that it would look good if it was cropped as there is to much groud in the picture.

I like the second mainly because of the light. I think that the parasol seems a little random and it stands to tall for the picture. It doesn't really appeal to me.

These are good and i can't wait to see more!

I like the first one a lot! I love the lighting, just perfect.

The second one is okay, but the line in the top off that kind of cuts off the light makes it seem like it was a malfunction of the camera rather than the actual light.

Cool. I'm not particularly religios, but that was a great picture. Thanks!

The first one had a slight glare to the right of the picture, but it no doubt pretty. The second one reminds me of hippies at Woodstock, lol.

It is so beautiful.
Really nice.

Heaven's Doorway: I actually though there was a door there! Stupid of me to look for it but I love the light shining through on the cross, with a figure on it. It seems weird to have a cross in the middle of nowhere.

Pilgrims & A Parasol: This seems to me the exact opposite of the above photo but with a main element [the parasol] with the heavenly light and instead of being deserted it is filled with people.

I like both =]

Wow these are great. I like them both.


I like the way the light shines down in them.

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