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Sun Sep 23, 2007 1:08 pm
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 2:12 pm
Rydia says...



Oooh, I love necklaces like that! I prefer the ones that are a touch more celtic in style but it's really pretty (I'm talking about the one with the black string by the way.) The other isn't really my sort of jewelery and I'm not sure that they go together but then... I'm supposed to be critiquing this as a photo am I not?

I think you should crop is so that none of the girl's chin is included and perhaps take a little of the hair away. To be honest, it might look better as just a huge close up on the two pieces of jewelery but it's up to you.
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 4:51 pm
Cade says...



1. It's blurry. This makes me sad.

2. You should crop it; the pendant is too close to the bottom edge.
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 5:03 pm
Via says...



I'll have to agree with the cropping angle..it's a cool necklace, but I would have preferred a more...exciting photograph? I think black and white would have given it a better....umph factor?
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Sun Sep 23, 2007 6:31 pm
Polkadots says...



I agree with write me. I think you should make the picture black-and-white for more interest, but still show the purple of the necklace for a pop.
  





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Sun Sep 23, 2007 7:20 pm
Jennafina says...



I think this would look better if you showed the bottom of the chin. As it is, it seems a little off balance. Apart from that, it's a really nice photo. I like both the necklaces and the blonde hair: it looks very fresh and clean.

If you've got a photo editing program, you might want to try upping the color saturation. It might look cool. :D
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 10:46 am
Myth says...



I like both necklaces, didn't realise they weren't together until others mentioned it. I think the hair should still be kept in if you decided to crop this. Also why not have her/you posing instead of looking straight at the camera.
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Mon Sep 24, 2007 5:57 pm
Leja says...



I think it's a pretty necklace, but as a picture, it doesn't do much other than being a picture of a pretty necklace. I think a different angle might be nice, like if the model tilted one shoulder away from the camera, or maybe was holding part of the necklace's chain?
  





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Mon Sep 24, 2007 11:46 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Ooh, I like this necklace. I have one sort of like it, except it's blue and glass. (Why does that matter? It doesn't. Whatever gave you the idea that it might?)

By the way, the girl's hair is pretty. Is that you, or did you take the picture?

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Tue Sep 25, 2007 3:51 am
Alteran says...



The necklace is very cool. I like the swirl, reminds of the Last Mimzy. The two look very nice together.
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