Young Writers Society

This is all stuff from the end of last year/the summer. I'm doing AP Portfolio this year, so after a few weeks or a month there will probably be quite a bit more art coming. If anyone has critiques, I'd really appreciate them, since I'm going to be drawing a lot and needing every scrap I can get.



reflection in a pocketwatch.


the trunk took a while.


anybody in the hudson valley looking carefully at this train schedule?


this is my sister.


too cool to not draw.


acrylic on cardboard. I like this way of painting.


something from my head, for a change. watercolor and ink, sketchbook.

Wow. These are... really good.

The tree and the train are totally awesome. Not that everything else isn't awesome; those are just the most awesome.

...Wow that was some high level vocabulary.

Anyway, excellent work! Keep it up.

[/not an art buff]

-St. Razorblade
The Official YWS Pirate

I really really loved the clubhouse one and how detailed it was... You need to do more of that, it looks like your strongpoint.


~Pol~

I love the train and the pocketwatch image. The tree is so great because of all the detail, looks like it could be from a child's book.

I'd really love to see more of your work.

you have a really unique style. I like it. I agree, the mixed media one with the train is amazing. well done! x

These are all like.....ridiculously sweet. I can't even pick a favorite or nit-pick them!

Sweet yo!! I'm overly impressed!

My breath has been stolen. Your style is precise and consistent. You obviously know yourself, or your work would be varied. It reminds me of my mother's work, so powerful and real, yet abstract at the same time.

Very well done.

The Tree house, Gas mask and Train ones are amazing. I like the others and they are really colourful and unique.

I think these are amazing and i can't wait to see more of your work!

Wow! These are all amazing.

I like how you've done the first one. The tree and the train ones are also fantastic.

Basically...you're amazing at art.

I hope you post more!

x

Impressive portfolio. Good range of styles shown.. very talented.

The train and the tree really stand out for me; the leaves on the tree fascinate me, it's like they're unfolding, and it's really cool. And the train, I love the colors, and the boxes coming from the train schedules and the bridge make it just perfect.

1) I LOVE THIS ONE. It's funny, and yet really smart. I especially like the dimensions.
2) WOW! I bet it has. The lines in the trunk seem so delicate, but the treehouse itself looks really sturdy.
3) I think this one is my favorite. It's like a colage, but big cities are my top destination and I really got the feeling of New York City in this one. Nice NYTimes touch. Train...mmm. I love this one.
3) Na. Not special. Very weird, sad in a way. But the horns aren't too...meaningful...(?)
4)NICE! Coloring needs to be redone, but you truly captured the feeling of wearing those masks during wartime. I still remember in Israel, I felt so isolated in these masks, so surprised to fell that plastic. This picture is just so full.
5)WOW! I love this one. Third favorite here. It's really well-drawn, though something's wrong... I can't put my finger on it...the wine coloring is just perfect.
6)eek. Alien. Na. Not that good. Interesting, though!

Thanks!!



collage, self portrait. Not finished because I am not finished.

I THINK THESE ARE AMAZING!!!
You deffinatly have Pretendual of being a artist or something.
Keep going and i think you could be VERY GOOD at it.
Well done.
X

You're a professional!

Gosh, all of the paintings rae so originnal and so creative

I love them all.

the last collage is excellent