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Wed Sep 05, 2007 12:39 am
Zombiemonkey says...



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Wed Sep 05, 2007 6:53 am
Sohini says...



Hey, how come no one's commented on this before?

I quite like it, the abandoned toy looks really sad...the edges are well drawn!
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:18 am
berrylique says...



i love this! it's really well-draawn(:
the doll is very cute too.
nice work!
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Wed Sep 05, 2007 7:14 pm
Swottielottie says...



Thats so cool.
Its sad and you drew the shadow really well!
I love it.
  





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Wed Sep 05, 2007 9:12 pm
Rydia says...



This is very nice. I love the posture and the shadow in the corner. The eyes could have been more circular and closer to the same size and the cobweb seems a little random but it's well drawn and the stitching looks really good.
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Thu Sep 06, 2007 3:12 am
Alteran says...



This is brilliant! I love the shading, the pose, the dool is so sweet. It truely embodies all those toys you forgot. I feel like it's saying, "Play with me..."
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Thu Sep 06, 2007 11:23 am
Saphira says...



I really like this. The shading is really well done and the whole thing is just draw amazingly. The pose is really sad and the eyes look like it would cry. :(

This is really good :)
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Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:10 pm
-Save-Ferris- says...



This is really great. I love the posture and shading and it is quite cute yet sad at the same time.
I think you should put on some more cobwebs because the one on its on seemed a little random and I think the eyes would be better if they were smaller. Except for that I love this (:

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Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:19 pm
sokool15 says...



Yes, very good. It's almost like the doll has personality and feelings. She's lonely and maybe a little scared and depressed. Play with me, please? Anybody! *whimpers*

:P

I agree about the cobweb, though. Nothing else looks dusty or cob-webby, so add in some more or take the web out. Anyway, good job!

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Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:28 pm
Via says...



I like it much as well! Woo! I really like the toy details, and the shading makes it worth it. Cute! I'd like to see some more drawings like this, it's cute!
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Thu Sep 06, 2007 10:37 pm
Leja says...



:( it makes me want to cry, but that is good, as the toy is something forgotten. I LOVE the shadows it casts in the corner.
  





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Fri Sep 07, 2007 1:34 am
little.angelfire says...



I'm only saying this because you all haven't seen it IRL. It's on the back of a notebook, so most of the shadowing is actually done from the brown coloring of the back of the notebook. I know Zombie isn't going to say anything. and I know she won't say that I gave her a little adive for the shadowing. spew on her XP

though, I'm happy her drawing turn out so well. I just wanted to add in that the only shading she did was around the doll, the rest was the effect the scanner did.
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Fri Sep 07, 2007 4:38 am
Teague says...



Distance formula! Aagh! Not another reminder of my poorly done Pre-Calc homework! *hides*

...the toy's awesome too. xD

Sorry, I've had bad experiences with that cursed formula the past two days.

But yeah, the actual drawing is really good.
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Wed Sep 12, 2007 8:12 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



This is great

And i like the random cobweb :) You are a super drawer (Y)

That is all i have to say :roll:

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Wed Sep 12, 2007 10:51 pm
Myth says...



This reminds me of the Raggy Dolls! "Look who's in the reject bin."

I love its floppy-ness, the stitches are perfect, in my opinion, but the spider-web doesn't fit. Maybe have it in the corner, above the head or not at all?
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