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Sketch of Legolas



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Mon Aug 20, 2007 10:43 pm
sokool15 says...



Legolas from The Lord of the Rings. Something's funny about the mouth and nose, don't you think? Anyway, thanks for bearing with me in my experimentation. Let me know if you can't see the drawings, and I'll try to figure something else out.

~Mademoiselle Kool

P.S. I'm not obsessed with the Lord of the Rings, I just happened to have a sketching frenzy and they were the first thing that came to mind.
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:43 am
Poltergiest says...



huh! The lines were faint and there was a kinda smdge on his right cheek but I liked it otherwise. The hair matched and you could almost see Orlando Bloom! Nice!

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Tue Aug 21, 2007 2:44 am
Alice says...



The lines are too light, I can't see them...make them darker and you'll get a proper crit.
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Tue Aug 21, 2007 3:22 am
Lynlyn says...



I have to agree. When you scan your drawings, try and mess with the settings a little until you can see all of the lines. As it is, I don't think we can actually see all of the lines that you made, so it's not really fair for us to critique it yet.

It looks nice so far, though! :)
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 10:02 am
Sohini says...



this is so cool! I like the intensity of th eeyes, how do you do that!?
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:02 pm
Saphira says...



I like this. It looks like Orlando Bloom and the eyes are brilliant. I do agree that the lines need to be darker but there is enough there to critique. This is really good!
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 6:34 pm
Areida says...



I can't see much of anything besides a faint outline, but the impression of it looks good just the same. ;)
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Wed Aug 22, 2007 7:16 pm
greenjay says...



Can't see much (you're probably tired of hearing that by now :P) but what I can see is really good! You should draw a pic of Brad.

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Sun Sep 23, 2007 7:37 pm
canislupis says...



I don't even see a piece of blank paper. Really! The picture didn't load for some reason.
  





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Mon Sep 24, 2007 11:50 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Aw... I can't see it. :(
  








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