Young Writers Society

Mostly this is a test to see if I have figured out how to work the whole moving pictures thing, but pleast crit and enjoy!

I love the first one. It reminds me of those romantic movies where they kiss in front of the sunset. xD Er... yeah. The trees look like they're kissing.

I haven't seen anything like the second one before. It looks a little off balance. Maybe if you cropped it so that the sun was at the very bottom of the picture it would look better?

The third is pretty standard serenity poster photography. It's a nice shot, but kind of boring.

Thanks for posting.

I like the first one, the effect the sun has between the trees is very nifty.

The second one is cool too. The clouds give the sun a more fiery effect and the tree helps take up space and give the picture balance.

And I agree with Jenna on the third. Pretty standerd. Not a bad pic, but standerd.

Ja, ja *nods wisely* I agree with the other critiques.

1. Absolutely beautiful. It really does look as if the trees are kissing...a wonderful thing to capture in a photo.

2. Yes, I agree with Jenna. Perhaps crop the bottom? hm.

3. Nice shot, and I like it, but it has no unique life of it's own, nothing to make it stand out from any other postcard.

So, there you are. You have just been told the same thing three timings with only slightly different phrasing, yes? How does it feel?

~Kool

Well, they've about covered it, but blast it, these are really good. *blushes* Not that I thought you couldn't do well at photography, of course not...just perhaps not that well. *ducks* Hey, it was a compliment!

The first one had that symbolic feel to it. It's felt as though it is intended for a certain theme. I liked how the trees are like shadowy. It intensifies that connection of the trees and the background.

My favorite is the third one. It's fantastic! But is it just me, or are they a little too big?

The one between the trees was so beautiful, but my favorite was the second one. The tree adds a beautiful mood.

Ok so like 90% of me taking pics is like me standing there with a camera and me going "hey that looks cool" and so I take a pic. Thank you though. Just to clear this up just in case your wondering there is no trick photography or photoshoping in my pics its just what i took.

I love the first one, but I would prefer a little more space for the sun to peek through. The second is okay, but would be better with water. The third is okay but I would ditch the plants at the bottom--too distracting.

1. Very cool and you've caught the sun at the perfect moment. I love the colour and it's such an awesome idea!

2. The sun is a little low for my liking and I wish it were closer to the tree. It's pretty though.

3. I like this one. Very classic. I'm a little distracted by the boat but it's a nice photo.

I LOVE SUNRISES!!!!! there so much better than sunsets which are rather depresing because they show the end of the day where as sunrises show the begining and you also get that nice morning smell. lol more more more i want to see more go on!!!

These are all purdy.

I like the first and the third just fine, but I think the second is my favorite. The boat on the horizon adds a nice touch too.

The second one makes me want to just float off into the sky...

they are gorgeous(:
i agree with the other authors, i loved the first one. i has the "feel", you know. it's a real romantic feeling.
sunrises are just the thing.

I really liked the first one. I think these are really generic, though, try next time taking a picture from an unusual angle or something to make it unique.