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Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:06 am
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Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:07 am
lulu_lizzrd says...



wow way awsome
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Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:27 am
Alteran says...



Nicely done. The porportions and stuff are really good. They're those two from bewfore but more human like. Very interesting.
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Sun Aug 12, 2007 4:33 pm
RED says...



I wonder who they are..... ;)

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Sun Aug 12, 2007 5:51 pm
Shine says...



nice picture.
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Sun Aug 12, 2007 8:59 pm
Teague says...



I like the detail on the clothes. But yeah, I'm going to go with the general opinion that this is a good picture.

Because it is! xD

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Sun Aug 12, 2007 9:29 pm
Empress Kat says...



Very nice. You should shade & colorize it more. But i love the style with the dark outlike. Very awesome pose and angle though. I'd say just make it look finished, maybe ink it.
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:20 am
Squall says...



This was good. I like how you did a back view of them instead of a front view. Adds more mystery to them. The holding hand thing also adds more depth to their character.
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 11:25 am
Saphira says...



Wow this is really good. I don't know what else to say! Keep it up!
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Thu Aug 16, 2007 2:23 pm
flytodreams says...



Pretty good, but I wish it had color. :D
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Fri Aug 17, 2007 6:45 pm
Via says...



My suggestion is mainly to watch the porportions (hands, feet especially) but the detail is great other than that..bravo.
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Sun Aug 19, 2007 12:00 am
Rydia says...



Awww, this is really good. I'll admit that the proportions are way out and the girl is standing awkwardly but I love the detail on the guitar and their outfits are awesome! Also, colour and an interesting background would be nice.
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Sun Aug 19, 2007 3:56 pm
Emma[dear] says...



Awww! This drawing is super adorable! My friend Caitlin used to play bass. She's actually on this site, idk if you know her....she's RED. I agree with the comment write_me said aboput proportions, but other than that this is really sweet!

Awesome job.

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Tue Aug 28, 2007 12:22 pm
-Save-Ferris- says...



Wow they are both pretty awesome.
The girls head looks a little bit sqaushed by her guitar case. 'Cept from that amazing, especially the detail.
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Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:46 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



Wow, these are pretty gosh darn amazing. Ahem.

I really like them. The only thing i'd probably suggest is to add a little colour.

:D Great detail aswell. Your shadings cool.


I'd like to see more :)


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