Young Writers Society

Ooh these are colorful.
I thought the one with Jack and Mesh and Dono was funny though...

I could tell the first one was Jack though... Mesh too (because Snoink said she was shortish...) and... Hmm Dono, I didn't realize until I read it

You're really good
I liked the tree lady too Very colorful and Liz likes color

On your first set;

One] I loved how you used the proportions to your advantage and it looked really good, although I think you should darken your lines or make them neater, so it stands out more on the first glance.

Two] This one was really clever and your use of colour is so amazing that I am jealous - I can't even colour in the lines. You're idea was very good, a tree like woman is what I got?

On your second set;

One] Your use of colour on this is lovely and also, the drawing itself is distinct, making it look original - with your own mark I mean.

Two] I didn't really like this one if I'm honest. Your use of colour seems to have been diminished and the colour that you did use doesn't work to the same effect as the others. Also, I can't really make out what the picture really is.

Three] This picture is great and it is only when I have seen this one that I have realised it is actually mother nature? Anyway, I love the use of colour and swirls on this and think it is a nice enterpretation.

Wow at the second one...

Your way of colouring is really good.

And they all seem very spiritualish and earthy


Super work, i'd love to see more!




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That second one there is amazing. Oh my! Its so..beautiful. (: Great job.

Ooh, and the second set is great as well! I love TreeWoman.

I love all the coloured drawing, brings life to them.

Woo! Using my Wacom Tablet for the first time

Her forehead looks weird XD

First try? I'm amazed. Looks like she bumped her head.

I drew this diddy during jazz appreciation... my inspiration: Jazz Music.

The Shading didn't come through too well off the scanner... but i still think it looks nifty. Like the style? Thick outline? The neck looks weird to me, don't know what's up with it. Like the cartoon-ish style hair?

Some stuff I drew... i should really take notes in class... oh well.

Very cool. For a moment I thought the last pic was gillyweed. Took a minute to load XD.

The first fairy's arm seems to be elongated. Alos i can see her thigh, but the angle makes it look as if she has a join about halway down her thigh. For the position of her leg, we should brobalby see her thigh go all the way to her knee.

Very cute, I like them very much. You draw the niftyiest things. (I think I just made up a word)

This is Seraph and Finn... Dono and Emily's characters. It's not finished, Dono is going to attempt an ink, but I don't like how it's looking... the clothes and armor don't seem quite right... any input?

Their legs look weird. Finn's legs look especially short. And, though I love Seraph's arms, Finn's arms are too stubby. They need to go out beyond the waist.

I love the jazz one. The hair is the best but I can't tell wether the person is male or female. Maybe that's a good thing?

I agree with Snoink, his legs are what let the drawing down. I love the woman though.