Young Writers Society

Here I'll post my random colorysketchythings that I've deemed not too hazardous to your eyesight.


My conceptual version of Common_Sense, a member over at TW


The unfinished MC in my yet-to-be-written story


I only did the coloring on this, lineart was done by Stirly. 'Twas her imagined version of me before she saw a picture xD

Yes...uh,erm...yeah. Anyway...

First guy is missing a few parts. His neck is to far to the left. The right side of his face is to big as well, doesn't match the left. And i think we would see his ear.

Colours are cool though.

The lady, Her arms are different widths. Her eyes are two different sizes and odd shapes. nice effect with the glasses though. Her ear has no top and it seems she is bald back there as well.

And the last one is hysterical. The Hair colouring is uber cool and the shirt is hysterical.

1: Your lines a little too rigid, try smoothing them out some (and giving him arms) =]

2: This really needs to be clearer. The shading in the hair just kind of makes it look incomplete, or like someone through white paint on her.

3: From what I can tell, with it being so little, this was is okay. The shading in the hair is much better than that in the previous one, that's for sure.

The last one's hilarious... Heh... cute li'l emo kid...

I like the last one best *so cute* and the first one, as well. Your MC looks like a neat person, but the chin is too small and some of the proportions are a little weird. She looks as if she'd be a great MC, though!

I agree with what the others said...also, the cigarette smoke on number 1. looks too much like a part of the lines on his face. But pleasant to look at!

~The Kool One

I like the last, his hair is cool but I'm not sure about the first two. Their necks just seem to long to me.

I like the wads of hair on the last. The other two don't really stick in my memory, which is probably not a good thing... *goes to check*

Well, I like the first guy's eyes. Other than that there's nothing to say for him...

On the second one, did you not finish coloring her or something? Or did she have a bad run-in with a box of chalk powder?

Peace, love, chocolate,
Muffin

Ooh, these are cool, nice style

I love the first one.
I like the sigarette.

What happened in the second drawing?

I like the third really cool