Young Writers Society

Someguy wrote:Really nice, I love the girl.

The neck was big in the first picture.

The grey. It made it depressing like you said. It always rains in this miserable world.

Loved it

Yeah, I think that I've fixed the necks pretty well so far, but I'll keep working on it.

But one message that I'm trying to convey in this story is that rain is okay, actually irreplacable. The world kinda needs it to go on, and we should accept that. As a matter of fact, we may as well enjoy it. I'm writing this story with that kind of mindset.