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Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:42 pm
Cade says...



I bought a digital camera. I likes it a lot. I've been having trouble getting pics up, so I hope this works. *crosses fingers*


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Thu Jul 26, 2007 10:58 pm
Leja says...



I like the last one best because of the arrangement of the petals, and I like the second to last one best because of the detail. The first one makes me want to ask the sodajerk for a rootbeer float :D Even though it's a Snapple bottle. Eh, oh well.
  





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Thu Jul 26, 2007 11:10 pm
electricbluemonkey says...



All the pictures of the rose(s) were incredible. The lighting was very well done and the contrast worked.

The third picture is too blurry, I can't really tell what it is.
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 1:08 am
Via says...



1: I would have liked this better with a wider view. Only having half of a red cap in the picture throws it off.

2: The cat is pretty okay. I like the light and the way it brings out the wiskers, but it lacks a very productive background.

3: The bird needs serious focus.

4: I would like this cropped a little bit more.

5: Eh, from the front would have been better. It's depressing, without a great background, and not very colorful.

6: Focus problems here again.

7: This is my favorite, even though it still isn't all the way in focus.



Overall: You definitely have potential, but your main problem is the focusing. Often times, to get a great picture, you have to take several pictures of the same object and review them--hopefully one will be in focus and great =]
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 11:31 am
Rydia says...



1. A close up of one jar of marbles might have been more interesting but it's nice.

2. Perfect angle, gorgeous cat. I love the detail of the eye. Very good focus.

3. Not the most interesting and needs more focus.

4, 5, 6, 7. These are all very nice. Number four is the best but they all have good detail and focus.
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Fri Jul 27, 2007 5:26 pm
RED says...



I, also, am into photography. My dad owned his own business when he was a photographer. And so I just got a new camera, too. I really like all your pictures of the roses. Those were really well done. The lighting was good, the way they were angled. It was all just very nice. Good job!

The first couple of pictures I liked, but not as much as the roses. I think that they could have been better, but they were still good.

Anyway. I really enjoyed looking at these. Well done!!

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Sat Jul 28, 2007 6:35 pm
Lady Pirate says...



The bird needs a little more focus.
I really liked the one of the roses.
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Sat Oct 13, 2007 6:01 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



I like the first; it's candy-rific!
Or marble-rific, depending on how you look at it.

And the rose ones are all good - it's nice to see pictures of roses that aren't all pristine and perfect... and not red. :)

Did you pose those at all? The little pile of petals looks it, a litte, because they're usually more scattered when they fall... But then they would be harder to photograph, so. :P

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I adore the cat one, and the last two of the petals, I love the colors and how they go together.

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Sun Oct 14, 2007 5:19 am
Lindsaroo says...



Woah these are really nice. I really like the one of the cat. Oh and the one of the single petal on the ground. It looks really nice.


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Sun Oct 14, 2007 6:57 am
Sohini says...



The first two are really good.

The petals in the last one too is nice and depressing.

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Sun Oct 14, 2007 10:30 am
Saphira says...



I like all of these and i think they are really good.

the cat is cute and i love the angle. 4.5.6 and 7 are really good but could be in better focus.

3 is too blurry and the angle is strange and does nothing for the picture.

These are good but i think that some of the angles are al ittle strange.
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Sun Oct 14, 2007 1:50 pm
Someguy says...



I love the cat!!!!!!!
I'll buy this picture of the cat!

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Fri Oct 19, 2007 5:05 am
B r i a s a u r u s says...



I really like the picture of the cat ;D
I also like the picture of the rose [fifth picture]. The colors are amazing.
  





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Fri Oct 19, 2007 7:58 pm
BeautifulJewel says...



They Are REALLY GOOD!!!
You must have and AMAZING Camera. Which One?
I have one which is good. Optio S7. I LOVE IT. Lol.
Keep going and i think you can be REALLY GOOD.
And i'm NOT joking.
But i would try and find some different pictures e.g the petals. There were alot of them and i think you should mabe have a range. But other wise... That was VERY GOOD.
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