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Tue Jun 26, 2007 9:46 pm
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Tue Jun 26, 2007 10:11 pm
Rydia says...



They're prtty cool. I love the wizard. Maybe do a coloured version too though. I could see him in deep blue robes with electric blue lines coming from that staff. Keep up the good work.
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Wed Jun 27, 2007 11:59 am
Sohini says...



hey, your drawings are really cool.
the style's fresh, the shading so neatly done and the entire pictures so weirdly different. they definately have an enchanting aura about them.
i like d th eruind engraved on the tombstone , the detalling was cool!

and the graphic art is beautiful, i love the calligraphy that says 'graphix' on that.
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Wed Jun 27, 2007 12:22 pm
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I really like all of these. I think that the wizard one is really good and the shadying was fantastic. It could look good in colour though.

I also like the darkness of the tree in the first one. It makes it really creepy. Very good.
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Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:38 am
Royboy says...



I like the third wizard one. The graphic art was pretty awesome. If you ever get that into a program, I'd love to see it. I'm sure it'd come out really nicely. =]
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Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:08 am
Jennafina says...



#1 is really cool. I like the mystery in it-- black sun, lonely tree, illegible gravestone... yeah. Very nice. The grass looks fake, though. To fix that, you could give it some more texture, by adding some more lines and leaves in other shapes.

#2 is great, but I'd like to see more sky and less ground. The man is too short (I think it's a man anyway, from the small hips.) I think proportionately, he should be about as tall as where his top hand is on the picture.

I absolutely love #3. I don't know the story to it, but I know it's a dramatic moment, and whatever it is, you've captured it perfectly. I think her (I think it's a she, but I'm just guessing from the outfit,) should have smaller hands and bigger feet.

I don't really like the last one, but the patterns in it are fun. :)

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Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:37 pm
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I have considered it and i am working on the first one and the graphic.

Also, the last picture was taken out of a book i read the other week. (Ash would probably know which book. :wink: ) The book was Debt of Bones by Terry Goodkind. It shows the Wizard, Zedd, making the Boundary.

All the other ones i just drew from ideas i got in my head.


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Tue Jul 10, 2007 4:51 am
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you should put the url thing around them so the pics acutally show up, it would help in the viewing process so much easier.

The tree in the first was cool, the headstone was over done.

Again with the headstone, the wizard's cool and all but again with the headstone.

Looks slightly biblical, cool.

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Tue Jul 10, 2007 6:14 am
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Wow--
Awesome! You've got some talent. :D Can't say I have a favorite. They all rock.
However, in number three, it looks like his left arm is broken. Could be I'm wrong, or its how his clothes are on him. It just looks... messed up. Well, that didn't help much, did it? Still, I really liked them all. :D Keep it up!

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Thu Jul 12, 2007 5:25 am
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Wow...I wish I had been that talented when I was 11...Great work!

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Sun Aug 05, 2007 6:23 pm
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Wow, Ariel. You're a really good artist for your age! I really like the 3rd one. The shading of the rocks are AWESOME, they look real! I like how he's in front of the sun [it is the sun, right?] And the shading looks good. All in all, great job! I can't wait to see more!
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 3:53 am
spokenfor09 says...



i like the first three. was a little confused by the forth. did u draw those with charcle. if so i like the way u did the shdowing. i did one thing with shadowing once and i like it. but i dont have it anymore i gave it to my girlfriend.
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:41 am
Alteran says...



They are all very good. Your details are superb. I do suggst working on your human proprotions. The ones you have are fair but with a little practice they could be astounding.


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Wed Aug 08, 2007 5:49 am
fothi says...



I really love the last one... the graphics one that you said you have to photoshop. I want to see it once it's photoshopped! The design is really cool!
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Wed Aug 08, 2007 7:03 pm
Ava says...



Wow, those are really interesting. Very cool shading too.
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