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I love the guy. His outfit is absolutely amazing and the hair is great, especially the moustache and beard. The way you've crossed his arms is a little awkward because it looks like he's missing a hand but the hat more than makes up for it. I think you know the other area that needs a little work and the pink teddy bear adds some nice contrast and really draws the eye. No pupils though? Scary.

My latest and greatest deviantID:

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61454311/

I really like the color schemes. She has a really dumb/blank expression on her face, which I think is great for your character description but if you weren't going for that then you might want to do a little editing for it!

Nope, that was exactly what I was going for Unfortunately, I have a nasty habbit of zoning out quite a bit, especially when I'm leaning on something.

I liked her a great deal. The description on the side was nicely done as well. It fills the space without making it clutteres.

Her eyes bothered me a bit though. It might just be the way her head is titled but they seemed off some how. It's probably just me though.

I think she's brilliant. Or rather, you're brilliant I suppose. Lol. I love the hair and the expression reminds me of myself when I'm day-dreaming. The outfit is really cool and I love the colour purple so great choice. The bottom love heart is a touch crooked but other than that, it's really good.

Whence once thought I was a blonde.
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61548412/

An avatar for Shadow on TeenageWriters:
http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61552603/

OMG! Stirly!!! You're here! Everything is better now. And yes, I thought you were blonde too.

Waffle girl is uber cool. I think the hand holding the notepad isn't quite right though. I would have liked the blush to b aibt more blended. Other than that she makes me laugh.

Evangelina wrote:OMG! Stirly!!! You're here! Everything is better now. And yes, I thought you were blonde too.

You're here?! WOOT!!!

I'm officially a blonde on the inside

To Adams:
Yeah, that hand is definately a bit off. The cheeks... there is no explanation. I think I wanted it to be uber bold and "I'M FRIGGIN' HAPPY! EAT THE WAFFLE OR DIE!"-ish. I definately went over the top with em'.

"I think I wanted it to be uber bold and "I'M FRIGGIN' HAPPY! EAT THE WAFFLE OR DIE!"-ish. I definately went over the top with em'."

I just laughed at loud. And with it being 1am and all, that's necessarily a good thing

I think the first one is really good but I have to agree that the blush should be paler and blended a touch more. Also, I'd love to see what colour eyes she has but then, I suppose that would ruin the expression which is, by the way, just perfect. Your choice of colours is good too.

The avatar is nice. His chin is rather pointed but then I don't know what Shadow looks like. The hair is great and I love the colour of the eyes.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/61691711/

Lily Potter.

Whoop! Can you say, "Ariel hair"?

A couple of things:

1. The wand
...stubby and chunky. XD

2. The eyes
are not almond-shaped or startlingly green!! :twitches:

3. The color of her vest/tie
are Gyffindor colors, and they're supposed to be grey, I think, at least until second year.

4. The freckles look like zits! Try a browner color.

Other than that, I like it.

Ooo funky!

The only thing I saw that Sumi hasn't pointed out is that I think her neck looks a little too long. It seems sorta strained and uncomfortable to me.