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Fri Oct 19, 2007 1:55 pm
ArtLuvr19 says...



Very nice! Reminds me of Treasure Island...I wonder why.

Woo-hoo! Girl pirates rock! The only thing that I would have changed is to maybe have her holding her sword out as if she is ready to fight...but that might have looked looked a bit cliche...heck, I dunno what I'm talking about anymore. It's an awesome picture!
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Tue Oct 23, 2007 3:48 pm
Esmé says...



Yeah, I agree with everyone before me. This is a realy awesome drawing! Sorry, it appears that I have nothing constructive to say.

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Sun Oct 28, 2007 11:57 pm
cheeztoast says...



shes hot four a pirate
  





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Mon Oct 29, 2007 12:03 am
piepiemann22 says...



I like them. Just a few minor things.

1.) The sword in the first one is a little sketchy and looks off to me.

2.) Again, the first. Is the man being stabbed or did he dodge it. If he is stabbed he would bleed.

I think that's it. Nice work.
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Tue Oct 30, 2007 3:03 am
thewonderworldofnight says...



I really like her...her clothes are really pretty (not in the annoying sense of the word, but in the good ol' "yo ho" sense of it) ;-)

just a question...did you draw your avie? It sorta has similar features to your pirate girl...

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