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Thu Apr 26, 2007 3:55 am
Sponson Light says...



I just beat Super Paper Mario for the Wii, my its a kick ass game. The use of 2-D and 3-D is ingenious and original, and is required to progress in the game.

After beating it, it brought me back to the 1993 movie Super Mario Bros.
Critics claim its a flop, but I liked it a lot. I mean, its Mario and Luigi!

Played by Bob Hoskins.
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Sun Sep 09, 2007 10:56 pm
Rydia says...



His features seem very close together and the moustache is a little off but inn general, you have a really good style. The shading works, the eyes are cool and I love the rather crooked smile.
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Sun Sep 09, 2007 11:44 pm
Nate says...



Super Mario Brothers the movie was awesome. Even though it's supposedly ranked as the worst cinematic adaption of a video game, I think it's the best! I still haven't played Super Paper Mario though. I have that (and Metroid 3 as well), but I'm holding off until after the semester is over.

The drawing is very true to life, and I really like the style you went with here.
  





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Sat Oct 13, 2007 5:44 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



Whoa, creepy! I knew a guy who looked a lot like that!

And, that's a nice picture, very real. I like his teeth.

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Sun Oct 14, 2007 5:33 am
Lindsaroo says...



It's really good but I think the mouth is kind of weird...but I like how it looks in the all.
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Mon Nov 19, 2007 5:01 am
hummingbird says...



your use of shading and including white is very impressive. not easy to do. you should be proud of this drawing, faces are so difficult it takes a special talent to pull it off. Your use of blending is perfect. i could say things about the symmetry but why. The picture is excellent.

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Mon Nov 19, 2007 5:11 am
Kim says...



i think you did a great job with the colors, and getting the face to stand out. This is very good.

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Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:42 pm
Gwenevire says...



Nice.
I like how you used the lines to create the image!
  





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Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:11 am
MadHatter says...



Not all that realistic, but over all it's pretty good. You could work on the shading a bit too.
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Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:47 am
Squall says...



It's pretty well drawn and the style of shading works well for him. The forehead seems bigger than normal but probably because the head itself seems a bit too big.
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Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:51 am
Teague says...



He looks a heck of a lot like my friend's dad. And I have no idea who he is, but hey. :D

I have a soft spot for portraits. I definitely enjoy the detail you put into this. Seems like it took loads of effort.

And I know it has nothing to do with the picture itself, but I like the smudgy things on the outskirts of the photo. How it kind of fades off into nothing. I'm just strange like that. *shrug*

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Sat Dec 08, 2007 7:34 am
Wolf says...



I really liked this. :)
The neck seemed odd; too bulgy, almost. But I dunno. Could be just me.
The shading was well-done and I really liked the kind of crooked smile and lopsided mustache. You have a really cool style!
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