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Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:23 pm
Rydia says...



The animation is very simplistic but pretty cool. I love the guns and when the stick figure gets shot, the explosion and wound are very colourful but I think it would look better if it was a little more realistic and if the guns didn't just appear and disappear.
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Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:28 pm
Wolf says...



Well, I don't really like gun violence, but that was pretty neat.
I agree with Heather about the Gun thing though.
I kinda liked the simple animation :)
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Mon Nov 26, 2007 9:05 pm
Saphira says...



I like the animation but i agree with the gun thing. I think the picture is good and i like the colour and expresssion. Very good!
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Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:32 pm
Gwenevire says...



I like how you added life to them...
I don't really like all the shooting and killing stuff.
Its kinda overused etc.
Stick people. Not really my style.
  





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Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:04 am
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Pretty cool if I do say so myself. Are you using Flash? I really like Flash but it's uber hard to understand. That is a lot like what I do on mine (Though mine usually involves someone getting their head ripped off, or their body shredded by something big.
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