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Mon Dec 18, 2006 6:18 pm
ibelieve_inme says...



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I open my mouth to sing, and you can see right through me.
I open my eyes to see, And I’m invisible
I look around me to take in my surroundings
And I disappear - And then the words begin...
  





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Mon Dec 18, 2006 9:53 pm
yoha_ahoy says...



Pretty awesome picture there. Is there anyway you could shrink it so we don't have to scroll to see the whole thing?
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Mon Dec 18, 2006 11:45 pm
Fireweed says...



You're very talented. :)
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Tue Dec 19, 2006 2:25 am
Sponson Light says...



What confuses me is how you got the fire.
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Tue Dec 19, 2006 3:34 am
Fand says...



This is a great photograph! I love the contrast between the fire and the silhouettes. I have to agree with yoha, though... having the image that big makes it a little unwieldy. Maybe you could upload another one a bit smaller, for other viewers' ease?
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Tue Dec 19, 2006 5:41 pm
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the fire was at a bonfire we do here every year. Everyone brings junk (wood, old couches, shelves, etc) and we pour lighter fluid over top and set it ablaze! Its quite fun, and then we all listen to music, dance, eat, visit, and watch the boys play tag-football. its a big tradition. The fire was the bigest ever this past year, so i ripped my camera out and snapped away. this one was my favorite.
I open my mouth to sing, and you can see right through me.
I open my eyes to see, And I’m invisible
I look around me to take in my surroundings
And I disappear - And then the words begin...
  





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Wed Dec 20, 2006 9:59 am
Myth says...



I also love the contrast. Who are the guy and girl?
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Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:06 am
ibelieve_inme says...



two of my close friends...
I open my mouth to sing, and you can see right through me.
I open my eyes to see, And I’m invisible
I look around me to take in my surroundings
And I disappear - And then the words begin...
  





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Tue Sep 18, 2007 9:27 pm
GingerLizzy says...



I love this with a passion I think.

But, even though it is actually two people dancing - right? - at a first glance, I thought it was two people, tied to a pole with rope around their wrists, beind burnt at the stake. So, because of this, I like it more, because it can be enterpretted many ways,

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Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:35 pm
Rydia says...



I think this is a really good photo. The contrast between the silhouettes and the fire works perfectly and the colours are simply beautiful.
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Tue Sep 18, 2007 10:38 pm
Leja says...



The contrast is absolutely gorgeous! The only thing is that the profile of the person on the left is pretty well defined; you can see a nose and lips, but the head of the person on the right is lost in the shadow. But in general, wow!
  





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Tue Sep 18, 2007 11:56 pm
Gadi. says...



I like this, but not as much as the other people. It's an amazing concept, but I would have liked one of them to stand out more-either the people would have been blurry and the fire really strong, or the fire in the background and people focused. Otherwise, it's rather bland in a unique way. (grrr tried to find the right word but could not!!)

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Wed Sep 19, 2007 5:04 am
Alteran says...



Looks very nice, I like how the fire pops out and makes the two figures stand out as well. The second person's head is too dark to see, but it's a lovely pic over all.
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Wed Sep 19, 2007 4:00 pm
sarahcrosbeh says...



Wow this is really well done, the idea is super too. :)


Good job. :)

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Tue Oct 09, 2007 11:10 pm
EnchantressMuffin says...



This is nice. Very powerful and interestingly framed.

Good job. :)

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