Wow thats just awesome,with the background its just seriously wow!!
"A good plot is like a dream.If you dont write down your dream on paper the moment you wake up,the chances are you'll forget it and it'll be gone forever"-Roald Dalh.
The second person's head isn't lost in darkness....its a fro! lol Sorry for the confusion - - - Thanks for all the crit tho, I greatly appreciate it!!!
I open my mouth to sing, and you can see right through me.
I open my eyes to see, And I’m invisible
I look around me to take in my surroundings
And I disappear - And then the words begin...
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