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Alot of kroft interface art



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Sun Dec 10, 2006 7:50 pm
Pivot_Master says...



KROFT CHARECTER CHOSEN

http://img292.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... oseht9.gif
Ive even chosen a theme song
Moby-Natural blues


Heres quite a fast chat interface
http://img292.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... er1gr3.gif

An explosion scene showing new blood artwork abig explosion and the flying charecter transporter

http://img488.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... ne1pt8.gif


The movies got a very james bondy feel to it
in sure youll enjoy it very much



Animals!
Yes it will feature many Many! animals heres a quick sketch i did of a lion that will be appearing (3d'd a little in photshop )
http://img488.imageshack.us/my.php?image=lionea5.png



Lovely landscapes
ive posted A link on another page
  





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Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:32 pm
Rydia says...



I think the second one is pretty cool but the text needs to be clearer, more readable and more frames would help slow the action down a bit and make it easier to follow.
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Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:39 pm
Gwenevire says...



1. I like how you spelt his name in the first one. With all those cool letters. But is that supposed to be snow in the background? Because if it is its going way to fast.

2. Again to fast... I don't like all the shooting. And the green stuff that comes out of the gun makes no sense at all.

3. It won't let me see the last two ones.
  








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