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Sun Dec 10, 2006 11:22 am
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Pivot_Master says...



worked on this first one for about an hour
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Goes quite fast so keep looking closley
  





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Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:34 pm
Rydia says...



That one's a bit strange and random to be honest. i love the landscape but the gun and the changing of time seem quite random.
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Wed Nov 21, 2007 10:39 pm
Wolf says...



Once again, I agree with Heather. The landscape was pwnful but the gun...?
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 5:03 am
Alteran says...



I liked it, but it moves to fast. I get what is happening, but it's just too fast. Try slowing down the changes, and maype move the sun acorss the sky and then moon. It looks kinda ood when the sun just turns into the moon.
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Sat Dec 01, 2007 3:35 pm
Gwenevire says...



Its interesting.
As I said last time. I like the motion you added to your picture.
I think you could add some more detail and stuff.
The gun... Well I like to play Tomb Raider with her guns it fun.
But guns in general freak me out.
  








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