Young Writers Society

alliyah wrote:Dude - this is good! [ALSO I totally relate to your disclaimers, because I very occasionally write songs too, but I feel like my singing is garbage] your voice sounded fine though! It's really hard to get a good recording in one-go, but volume and everything seemed decent. And your guitar playing is extremely catchy! I liked the pace of the whole song, that it really moved along each verse jumping into the next naturally.

I'm not sure I get the line "does your room still paint the street" - but there are some of these lines are really gems - the juxtaposition of someone calling themselves an insatiable animal, but also just talking about "anecdotes" is sweet - and the premises of ghosts and run-aways is really interesting, and makes the song's narrative really strong. Hope to hear/read more music from you!