Young Writers Society

At the moment my novel is called Purity, and I think it'll stick around for quite a while so let's go with that.
My novel is a fantasy world where demons are everywhere. They're basically shadow animals/creatures, sort of like Balrogs. (A bit like how it looked in the Fellowship of the Ring movie) Anyway, normal people only see a few, but Enna is cursed and she can see them all. Along with two brothers, Kadence and Belemar, Enna is recruited by an organisation to find the "Pure One", a person who sees no demons at and- if legends are true- is the only one to kill the demon of all demons that is about to wake up.
the mood is rather serious, but not overly so. It's certainly fun and adventurous as well, there's just kind of a threat of danger.
There isn't really a specific important place, but the characters are mostly just traveling through thick forests and mountains. If you need one place, I would say something like an older city square with a wall around it, and lots of stone houses and streets. That's kind of important to Enna's house.
For characters, I'm just going to describe Enna. She is 16, with fairly long dirty blond hair that she ties back with a leather headband. She has Amber eyes, and she's probably a bit tan. Enna is mute, but has telepathic abilities. She's a their, but she has strong personal beliefs. She's compassionate and can be fierce if her friends are endangered.
For colors, I definitely want some darker colors in there, but I would like it not to be just black and white, if you can.

Name:Magecraft book 1:Light and Darkness

Plot-to most people, Rajiv Patel isn't someone to bother about. He's an awkward, shy, geeky kid who no one would really talk to. But there is more to him than meets the eye... The fourteen year-old boy has had inside him the spirit of a an ancient Archmage named Arathus ever since he uncovered a mysterious coin from under the ground. The Archmage slumbers most of the time and only rises to complain and help the boy with his homework and tests, as was their agreement. For years this has gone on, but now things start to get weirder. When a vampire attacks a classmate, the worlds of magic and Rajiv meet. Rajiv defeats the vampire with magic, and finds he and the mage are so linked the can harness his magical energies. However this is not as fun as he thinks. After he saves his friend, the order of mages that Arathus once led that still exists secretly in the modern day captures him and sends him to a far away brutal mage school where he must prove himself..or die. But that's not the end of his problems, as with the help of Archmage Arathus, he uncovers a dangerous plot that threatens the safety of the universe and everyone in it...

MC-Rajiv Patel, a geeky kid. He usually wears a hoodie, or a long wizard's cloak if the cover is set when he is in the school, t shirt, jeans and sneakers. He's Indian as I'm sure you've made out from the name with light brown, perhaps tanned looking skin. His hair is short and black and his eyes are black too.
If you need a place, then perhaps an old fortress would do best, which is what the school will resemble. Oh and it is also near a cliff, over which they throw those apprentices whom they find weak. Oh and he could hold hold a magic staff which he would be using at the school, like a wooden one with a jewel or the carved head of an animal at the top.

Genre-Fantasy