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Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:21 am
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rainforest says...



Hello there! Not a lot of people knew that I actually am an artist, if you didn't read my bio. I will show you some sketches I have recently done. I love being an artist. I have done it for a while now, probably for about five or six years.

Here is a really neat tree house, kind of like an elf house.

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Here is a curious eye looking to the right.

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Here is a woman, my friends called it a "gypsy woman."

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And finally, here is an Indian male wearing a headdress. Sorry if it's a little blurry though!

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I hope you like these creations! I will hopefully post more soon. Happy writing! :D
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:33 am
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Swiftfurthewarrior says...



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These are beautiful!
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:34 am
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rainforest says...



Thank you!
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 2:58 am
Sunshine1113 says...



These are really good :) Something about them doesn't seem proportional though and its annoying me that I cant pick out what exactly is wrong so I can tell you how to make your artwork better... The nose's are fine but something about the lips and eyes are off... Other than that I think you are very talented and have a lot of potential in your art. :)
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 5:21 pm
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captainearth says...



grate artwork unknown391625 keep drawing :D
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Sun Jan 11, 2015 6:12 pm
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Nightshade21 says...



These are amazing! Your really talented
  





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Tue Jan 13, 2015 7:20 pm
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Lumi says...



These are good as far as sketches in general go!

With your tree drawing, I'm definitely skeptical of how straight the branches extend and how right-angular their limbs are in extension. So that's definitely something I would work on--understanding the curvature of naturally-shaped things defined by gravity and imperfect growth. Beyond that, I'd love to see a background or landscape in addition to the tree to give it some context for size; right now the only comparison element is the tire swing.

The eye is nicely done as far as general shape and lashes go, but the thickness of the iris is off-putting to me, and the tear duct is on the wrong side if that line to the side is supposed to be the edge of the face. The same is applied to the eyebrow's root. That said, both points are moot if the line to the left is just the nose that extends off the page.

With the profiles, I would probably spend some time gauging reference photos to better understand jawlines and how the neck doesn't end where the head begins, but rather expands into the shape of the head naturally. Despite this, the detail work (i.e. the woman's earring) is pleasing to the eye. Just work on proportions and, again, angles.

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Thu Jan 15, 2015 2:31 pm
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ThereseCricket says...



Great work, Captain!

These are truly beautiful. <3
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Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:20 pm
rainforest says...



Oh wait! I have to change the thread name, if possible.
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Thu Jan 15, 2015 11:43 pm
niteowl says...



You should be able to change the thread name by editing the first post.

Great drawings! :)
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