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Tue Jun 02, 2015 4:51 am
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Poopsie says...



When I was young I dreamt of light
But I have lived
Now I sleep no more
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Tue Jun 02, 2015 5:31 am
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Zolen says...



Blessed ever is the paranoid.
Forever can I see.
Those crawling hands.
Those twitching feet.
This fear is not a dream.

That height, that snake, that river bed.
I say its clearly real.
You mock me as the paranoid.
But it's just that I can see.

a reading of my sudden idea:

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Sat Jun 06, 2015 3:11 am
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bluewaterlily says...



There is something about an ingrown life
That breaks you slowly
Shard by jagged shard
And they expect you to superglue the pieces with your own blood
And to wipe away the messy aftermath with your tears
They never taught you to be an architect
Capable of resurrecting the debris from foundation up
You are a self-acclaimed artist
All you can do is try and fit together the remnants of the broken window pieces
Into a convoluted puzzle of a mosaic
Known to the world as a clinical abstraction in a psychiatrist’s absent scribbles
"A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language." - W.H. Auden
  





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Sat Jun 06, 2015 6:02 am
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CorruptedRoseJen says...



When I was young and the world still new
Society took me by the hand
It taught me what I needed to do
It taught me how to understand

Thinking these words to be true
I took my soul and ironed it through
I took my mind and away it flew
I took my heart, placed stone in lieu

See my hair? All shiny and smooth
See my eyes? Mascaraed bright
See my smile? Perfect to the tooth
See myself? No self in sight

Like a pencil I sharpen myself
Like a rose with plastic dew
Like a medal on the shelf
A perfect doll made just for you

I laugh, I smile, I talk, I sing
So sweetly those flatters sound to me!
Stardust gleams and acrylic bells ring--
Am I not the only star you see?

Oh laugh--laugh on! I say
As I dance, are you not swayed?
Perfect in my fabricated way--
Born of earth, I am an angel made!

Who needs of a true identity?
Who thirsts for individuality?
Who strives towards creativity?
Who yearns not simplicity?

Yet as my first-born self lay here
As trampled over as ruins can be
Alas! Why do I still feel this tear?
The one you love's not me.
My room is an insane asylum, and I am the patient.

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Sat Jun 06, 2015 6:48 am
rainforest says...



I can feel no more,
I have no sense at all.
I am a lost soul,
in a room of four black walls.

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Sat Jun 06, 2015 8:45 am
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Pompadour says...



bleeding malarkey came home again
where tomes of outbreak cast
a thousand whistles asleep.
(a thousand whistles filling a thousand heartbreaks
with evergreen reveries.)

bleeding malarkey remembers spaces between the walls
where earthen quakes broke us open,

then left to gather wits
and wreak songs against our skins.

but bleeding malarkey knows: change
is like a pebble in a river,
to be deposited in the wake of a life raft--sailing past
Jakarta and past the seventh sea.
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this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  





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Tue Jun 09, 2015 12:58 am
Vervain says...



[may or may not be cheating by writing loose lyrics]

hundred names in a row
pull the lights down low
feed the flames to the dogs
burn prayers for logs

throw your stones at the sinner
throw your hate at the winner
pull the lights down dimmer
'til we all go blind

little girl down the lane
little sparks of pain
rivulets in my spine
i defrost,
shine

shimmer, glitz and glimmer
pull the lights down dimmer
pull the lights down dimmer
'til i lose my mind
stay off the faerie paths
  





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Fri Jun 12, 2015 4:56 am
bluewaterlily says...



A really bad haiku:

Spoiler! :
Her brain was hungry.
She ate too many large words
They slowly choked her.
"A poet is, before anything else, a person who is passionately in love with language." - W.H. Auden
  





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Fri Jun 12, 2015 5:22 am
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Skydreamer says...



dark circles
are under my eyes
from the sleepless nights
and the tired days where i spent
my time trying to find a way out of the
grave i dig myself every time i think of days
when my dark circles never existed because instead
there were light sparkles in my irises and bright smiles from
my lips.
I believe in that, which is not seen.
I call it truth, faith, hope, life.


~~~~Sometimes life beckons us to be different~~~~

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Fri Jun 12, 2015 6:03 am
Apricity says...



Quick two second poetry.

We see the magnificence of their flight,
sunlight across kaleidoscope wings.
Poets praise their beauty,
dreamers, of their significance

yet the hours spent in darkness, enclosed within
hidden, unseen
what of them? Do we bow our heads in reverence
or ignornace
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'And those who were seen dancing were thought to be insane by those who could not hear the music.' ― Friedrich Nietzsche

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Fri Jun 12, 2015 7:22 am
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CorruptedRoseJen says...



Periwinkle stars slowly ebb into light
Tucked into bed with naught but the Moon's company--
The celestial firemen had kindled their lanterns for the night


...

I have no idea what that was.
*hides*
My room is an insane asylum, and I am the patient.

Beware of Dog signs are overrated. Beware of Writer.

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Fri Jun 12, 2015 9:09 am
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Pompadour says...



if a thousand lifetimes were to pass by
and i never discover your name,
i would be like a root, edged precipitous
and dangling.

but if a single day were to pass
without the ignorance of a life unlived,
i would become an oak--full blooming
yet humble when the wind calls my name.

sometimes, my ambitions exceed me.
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this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  





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Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:23 am
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Vervain says...



the most relaxing things:
writing to-do lists
making dinner
watering flowers
breathing cold air
curling up under a blanket
& watching the thunderheads roll in
stay off the faerie paths
  





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Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:40 am
Evander says...



my head keeps on hurting
spinning

it can't stop
it won't stop

and when i get comfort
[warm, relaxing, finally being able to close my eyes]

thunder strikes
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Sun Jun 14, 2015 8:19 am
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Pompadour says...



in my imaginings i am a horse-drawn carriage
rattling down lanes and laughing with every bump
in the road. i am content to be
your vehicle, your grace, teasing
yet loyal.

(this is what i think i am.)

but in your imaginings, i am a wild horse
that refuses to stand by the roadside,
that refuses to drag the carriage
(except into the hedge, where it belongs).

it is not surprising that our imaginings disagree;
neither of us is true to ourselves anyway.
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this sky where we live is no place to lose your wings
  








She conquered her demons and wore her scars like wings.
— Atticus