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Write the worst poem you can.



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Thu Apr 15, 2021 11:43 am
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Haileyg21 says...



I work all day
stay up all night
most people I do despise
they take time
without giving you a prize
Id rather spend all day
playing video games in a hoodie
then be in the presences of someone who hurts me.
Im scared of people and what they do
so I turn to 3D characters who are much more to you.
People, crowds and all things loud
scare away most things proud.
Living in a small place is where I belong
time to hide away from the crowd.

-Hi! people scare me. Thanks I hope it was bad but good-
Love is love. Just flow with it and all will be happy. Also take a moment to smell the flowers my friends because thats all we need. ~Love your Bisexual Trans friend.
  





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Thu Apr 15, 2021 1:10 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



I feel the same
But I don't dress the same
I was soft
now i'm edgy
I use to listen to pop
But, my new playlist is all about metal
I feel the same
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

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Thu May 06, 2021 6:43 am
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Liminality says...



poems, like life problems, are only as dramatic as you make them sound

I seem to make
sentences even less rhythm-
-ic than supposed to be,
even though there's rhythm-
-ness in prose as it is,
like seeming to make
sentences even less figurative
than they already were,
I'm melodramatising
this run-on sentence.
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Thu May 06, 2021 10:59 am
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Haraya says...



Haiku on peanuts
Come get a crack out of this
It will drive you nuts
  





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Thu May 06, 2021 6:26 pm
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manilla says...



Writing poetry
Kind of like
This where
You can't
Get a
Complete thought
Out and
The line breaks
Aren't thought out
And serve
Nothing
To emphasize words
Or tell
A story
Or convey meaning
And the
Flow doesn't
Exist
And I have a
Hard time
Reading

a/n: it is a stylistic choice though and works in some poems, so take with a grain of salt! :pirate3: :pirate2:
Pronouns: she/they

From the wild manila folder of YWS's office.

When the last tree has fallen
And the rivers are poisoned
You cannot eat money


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Sat May 15, 2021 5:23 am
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Liminality says...



The mirror just wants to
destroy itself,
on the shelf,
no more health.

A thousand scattering shards
like ice cream,
cold and,
lacking consistency
(badly-made ice cream).

It's too many pictures,
too many
things to be
for any thing
to hang onto.

We all need something to hang onto.
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Wed Jun 02, 2021 7:47 pm
LilPWilly says...



This poem won’t be
A bad poem
Because they only suck
When I try
Just kidding
God, girl, adventure
  





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Wed Jun 02, 2021 8:00 pm
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Hijinks says...



candles.
i don't remember
what I was going to say
but candles seem, how should i say,
~poetic~
like, the little bebe flamies?
try desperately to hold hands with the air
but always the air seeps through their fingers
just like me
oops
i made a sad relatable metaphor
let's call it a day
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Wed Jun 02, 2021 8:03 pm
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LilPWilly says...



Nah, i can do better.

My heart is like my sister's constipation
Red, squishy and disgusting.
I offer it flinchingly.
My love is like a beautiful rainbow
Except it runs straight, parallel to the ground,
So it never reaches a pot of gold.
You can blame planking.
God, girl, adventure
  





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Sun Jun 06, 2021 2:26 am
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alliyah says...



there are no barns to hold down catfish
so they float around dizzy in the grass - and we try
to fence them in, futile tasks we keep like tacking
old leaves unto trees, backwards aging, and
counting birthdays in reverse, we can't hold everything
in nor can we quite forget, so the catfish roam
wild, until we are forced back into the water;
to grow gills, then fins, then lose our feet
and you can teach a person to run, but you never
can unteach them, it's something about chasing
and leaving, that once a door is open, it's unhinged
and too much sunlight piercing into darkened rooms
can't be avoided, like deep sea fishing with only lantern light,
so you avert your eyes just enough to see they're still
out there, the catfish, and they're multiplying.

inspired by @ChesTacos comment about my unbirthday post
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jun 18, 2021 1:44 pm
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Liminality says...



i Forget how 2 learn each morning
when All i have are lists of arbitrary rules
and Definitions i mus explen to my parents
when We three are ded and in tiny urns
we Will never be unprobl3matic
we Will n3v3r b enuf
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Fri Jun 18, 2021 2:00 pm
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sakeofvanity05 says...



me
we
"It was a great mistake, my being born man;
I would have been much more successful as a seagull or a fish.

~ Eugene O'Neill, Long Day's Journey Into Night
  





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Thu Jul 15, 2021 1:21 am
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ChesTacos says...



I'm a taco
I have cheese
And veggies
*boop*
  





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Thu Jul 15, 2021 6:53 pm
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Hijinks says...



i
we me
you:
one or
two or more
people,
and we become
words
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

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(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Thu Jul 15, 2021 7:48 pm
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Valkyria says...



Topsy turvy,
the world is curvy.
Spinning round and round,
and always without sound.
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  








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