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Haiku Battle



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Thu Jan 10, 2013 1:29 pm
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PenguinAttack says...



I am bad at this,
how syllables slide toward
your cloudless skies now.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Thu Jan 10, 2013 1:40 pm
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noninjaes says...



And the suns shines bright,
raining liquid summer warmth.
Forty degree days.
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Being awesome since Jan 2012.
  





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Thu Jan 10, 2013 6:45 pm
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Lumi says...



High temps fluctuate,
cover the green blades with gold:
a dream in winter.
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Thu Jan 10, 2013 7:15 pm
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FermentingFruit says...



Writing a Haiku
Forgetting syllable count
What was I doing?
Save time... see it my way.

"During high school, I played junior hockey and still hold two league records: most time spent in the penalty box; and I was the only guy to ever take off his skate and try to stab somebody."
-Happy Gilmore
  





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Thu Jan 10, 2013 8:25 pm
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Sparkle says...



I can't remember
the innocence of flowers.
Midwinter morning.
"So what? All writers are lunatics!"
-Cornelia Funke, Inkspell
  





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Thu Jan 10, 2013 9:12 pm
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AlfredSymon says...



And her grace, so light,
sidled by the manly lot,
holding sword and shield
Need some feed? Then read some! Take a look at today's Squills at In the News.

The Tatterdemalion takes a tattle!

"Stories are like yarn; just hold on to the tip and let the ball roll away"
  





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Fri Jan 11, 2013 3:00 am
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PenguinAttack says...



Gum boughs slink lower
as skies raise red and ash hot
our breath will refresh.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Fri Jan 11, 2013 3:22 am
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Lumi says...



The birds observe us,
two machines lying in tar.
Can they see our eyes?
I am a forest fire and an ocean, and I will burn you just as much
as I will drown everything you have inside.
-Shinji Moon


I am the property of Rydia, please return me to her ship.
  





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Sun Jan 13, 2013 7:55 pm
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Karzkin says...



There are no eyes here,
here in Death's Other Kingdom;
Mistah Kurtz - he dead.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Wed Jan 16, 2013 6:06 am
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AlfredSymon says...



Live, never can we,
for wind will stop and earth...shake!
Pawns are we to death
Need some feed? Then read some! Take a look at today's Squills at In the News.

The Tatterdemalion takes a tattle!

"Stories are like yarn; just hold on to the tip and let the ball roll away"
  





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Wed Jan 16, 2013 2:04 pm
PenguinAttack says...



The mouth of the earth;
forever speaking to me
in so many tongues.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Thu Jan 17, 2013 11:32 am
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AlfredSymon says...



Grassy tentacles
wrapped 'round my shriveling heart
and returned greenness.
Need some feed? Then read some! Take a look at today's Squills at In the News.

The Tatterdemalion takes a tattle!

"Stories are like yarn; just hold on to the tip and let the ball roll away"
  





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Fri Jan 18, 2013 1:42 pm
PenguinAttack says...



Taste the drying ash
settled on your tongue, again
reincarnation.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Fri Jan 25, 2013 4:39 am
yubbies21 says...



new heart, full of life
smooth skin and perfect features,
wrought anew this day.
beep
  





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Sun Feb 03, 2013 2:02 pm
AlfredSymon says...



Count the syllables,
found anything wrong with them?
Maybe you would.
Need some feed? Then read some! Take a look at today's Squills at In the News.

The Tatterdemalion takes a tattle!

"Stories are like yarn; just hold on to the tip and let the ball roll away"
  








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