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Haiku Train



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Sun Aug 30, 2020 2:33 pm
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Starve says...



blazing with anger,
fingers tapping at a screen
send emotion-bits.
  





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Sun Aug 30, 2020 5:36 pm
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alliyah says...



These emotion crumbs -
leftovers from pain long gone
will be swept away.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Sun Aug 30, 2020 8:22 pm
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Hkumar says...



will be swept away
by the wave of emotions
into the unknown.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sun Oct 18, 2020 4:21 pm
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Hijinks says...



the unknown is a
more familiar place than
clear understanding.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sun Oct 18, 2020 4:38 pm
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starlitmind says...



clear understanding
cannot exist when we don't
understand ourselves
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Sun Oct 18, 2020 7:57 pm
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Hkumar says...



understand ourselves
through quiet introspection
embracing the truth.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sun Oct 18, 2020 8:12 pm
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Euphory says...



Embracing the truth,
no matter how difficult,
enlightens the soul
Viola Tricolor also known as wild pansy, Johnny Jump up, heartsease, heart's ease, heart's delight, tickle-my-fancy, Jack-jump-up-and-kiss-me, come-and-cuddle-me, three faces in a hood, love-in-idleness, and pink of my john-
  





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Wed Oct 21, 2020 11:20 am
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Hkumar says...



enlightens the soul
by planting seeds of self-love,
letting it spread joy.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Fri Oct 23, 2020 10:44 pm
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Hijinks says...



let the joy spread far
and wide, slowly oozing as
buoyant lava does.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Fri Oct 23, 2020 11:45 pm
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starlitmind says...



bubbly lava drips
from the sky, a product of
the hate we unleash

Spoiler! :
@whatchamacallit @Hkumar this is kind of random, but I love seeing you guys post here <3

Hkumar, I love how your latest haiku is so positive. You always include meaningful and powerful imagery in your haikus, even when they are simple images. I feel like you could make a haiku with any and every single line given to you. I love reading how you make the lines given to you your own <3

whatcha, your imagery is always so unique, and you bring thought provoking ideas to my mind. "the unknown is a more familiar place" one is probably one of my favourite ones you've written. That's such a neat concept to think about. And "buoyant lava"? I absolutely love that line!

YOU GUYS ARE COOL
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Sat Oct 24, 2020 8:23 pm
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Hkumar says...



the hate we unleash
from the cracks of broken heart,
let it channel out.

Spoiler! :
@starlitmind Thank you so much <3
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:20 pm
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yosh says...



let it channel out
the hateful sorrow and grief
no more joy again
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Wed Oct 28, 2020 3:36 pm
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LUNARGIRL says...



no more joy again
it has evaporated
and now it is gone.
"ONE CANNOT BE BRAVE WHO HAS NO FEAR."
  





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Fri Nov 13, 2020 2:42 pm
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Hijinks says...



now it is all gone;
the sun sinks ominously
below x-axis.

Spoiler! :
@starlitmind aaaah thank you <3 YOU'RE ALSO VERY COOL
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sun Nov 15, 2020 1:26 pm
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Liminality says...



below x-axis,
deep sea darkness thickens black;
eyes open, glowing.
she/her

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