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Fri May 22, 2020 5:12 am
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Que says...



A sinking suburb.
Rain days, floodwaters rising.
My footprints, erased.
>Previously Querencia<

All I want is to write and be happy. c:
  





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Fri May 22, 2020 1:14 pm
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kattee says...



Footprints long gone and
Bones buried deep within the
soil, unknown to man.

"Dinosaurs"
If you want some sweet reviews to your poems, short stories, and essays, come by Katteelog.

Have a lovely day❤️
  





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Mon May 25, 2020 12:01 am
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starlitmind says...



this soul unknown to
me; i cannot remember
the touch of its light
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Mon May 25, 2020 1:14 am
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looseleaf says...



The touch of its light,
brings warmth to all around it,
bringing everyone joy.
"How do I feel? I feel like a baked potato."
- Gale Hanson, 1988
  





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Mon May 25, 2020 1:28 am
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quitecontrary says...



He brings so much joy
Stuffed in a large red bag; bells
Ring softly like stars.
"It is only through shadows that one comes to know the light."
- St. Catherine of Sienna

"One of the most cowardly things ordinary people do is to shut their eyes to facts."
- C.S. Lewis
  





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Mon May 25, 2020 6:48 am
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chiefhoco says...



Sinking like the moon
Those big eyes like pizza pie
Out of amore
  





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Sat Aug 08, 2020 6:26 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



out of the clamour -
white noise that rattles my ears -
I can hear quiet.
The best thing to hold onto in life is each other.

Audrey Hepburn
  





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Sat Aug 08, 2020 6:48 pm
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starlitmind says...



i can hear quiet
seeping through the tiny cracks
of old picture frames
Last edited by starlitmind on Sat Aug 08, 2020 8:56 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Sat Aug 08, 2020 8:16 pm
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alliyah says...



These old picture frames
are hollow now, memories
faded long ago.
i can't love you if you don't know the difference between teal & dark cyan
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you should know i am a time traveler
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there is no season as achingly temporary as now

  





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Sat Aug 08, 2020 8:36 pm
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Hkumar says...



faded long ago
in the labyrinth of time
and lost forever.
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Sat Aug 08, 2020 9:00 pm
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starlitmind says...



stars lost forever,
outshined by constellations,
forgotten in dark.
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Sat Aug 08, 2020 9:09 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



Forgetting the dark,
I soak in syrup gold and
let the light warm me.
The best thing to hold onto in life is each other.

Audrey Hepburn
  





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Sat Aug 08, 2020 9:17 pm
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starlitmind says...



let the light warm me,
i beg the sun, but he's too
far away to hear
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Sat Aug 08, 2020 9:23 pm
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alliyah says...



Birds too far to hear,
Only see their wings - rise, fall,
long to hear them sing.
i can't love you if you don't know the difference between teal & dark cyan
&
you should know i am a time traveler
&
there is no season as achingly temporary as now

  





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Sat Aug 08, 2020 10:05 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



I long to hear the
song of bubbling laughter and
feel its gentle hug.
The best thing to hold onto in life is each other.

Audrey Hepburn
  








Pain is filtered in a poem so that it becomes finally, in the end, pleasure.
— Mark Strand