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Haiku Train



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Thu Jun 30, 2022 6:29 pm
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NewHope says...



Before I come home
The chicken might crow and run
Through the open fields

And I already wrote it:
Still I am not done
As I gasp for air but find
Only water there
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Fri Jul 01, 2022 1:35 pm
Kelisot says...



Through the open fields
A labyrinth of dead crops,
I still wander here
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sat Jul 02, 2022 11:17 am
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NewHope says...



i still wander here
through the moonglade’s thick brush
stargazing quietly
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Sat Jul 02, 2022 1:54 pm
Kelisot says...



Stargazing quietly
A star falls into my eyes
Energy fills me
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sun Jul 03, 2022 3:49 am
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NewHope says...



Energy fills me
Like a soprano’s shrill voice
Through the cathedral
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Sun Jul 03, 2022 4:32 am
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Starve says...



through the cathedral
a soft dirge reverberates
'tis the end of times.
  





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Sun Jul 03, 2022 2:22 pm
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NewHope says...



“‘Tis the end of times,”
Scream the skeletons inraged
Fires in the sky
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Sun Jul 03, 2022 7:16 pm
Kelisot says...



Fires in the sky
Embers rain down on the ground
Blooming a new life
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sun Jul 03, 2022 10:00 pm
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NewHope says...



Blooming a new life
Flowers of ash sprout through earth
Ghost-lilies growing
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Mon Jul 04, 2022 12:57 am
Kelisot says...



Ghost-lilies growing
Supernova exploding
Echoing across
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

beans
  





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Mon Jul 04, 2022 8:38 pm
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NewHope says...



Echoing across
The oceans of space, stars fall
In glimmering waves
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Wed Jul 06, 2022 4:38 pm
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Kelisot says...



In glimmering waves
Prospers the cold marine life
Dancing with bubbles
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Wed Jul 06, 2022 11:38 pm
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NewHope says...



Dancing with bubbles
A crane stands single-footed - fish
Swim around my feet
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Sat Jul 09, 2022 6:19 pm
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Kelisot says...



Swim around my feet
As the koi and beta glide
I am now your fish

(Sorry for late response, thought I was the last person who did it for some reason)
I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sat Jul 09, 2022 10:20 pm
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NewHope says...



I am now your fish
Through the shaky brown reeds and
The red heron feet

(Don’t worry about it. I’m just happy to be able to continue.)

Spoiler! :
@Shady… fish poems…
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