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Tue May 05, 2020 6:36 pm
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TheCursedCat says...



(Yup I'm sorry alliyah I'm working on it :()
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Tue May 05, 2020 6:57 pm
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looseleaf says...



Ready for today,
A young student awakens,
To the birds singing.
"How do I feel? I feel like a baked potato."
- Gale Hanson, 1988
  





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Tue May 05, 2020 7:05 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



To the singing birds
a dawning sun harkens new
horizons to fly.
My heart is a message in a glass bottle.
The cork is tangerine, so tangerine that i have mistaken it before
for a forgotten starfish limb.


  





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Tue May 05, 2020 9:21 pm
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KahleneTenorio says...



Horizons to fly
Feels free and proud in the sky
A beautiful bird.
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Wed May 06, 2020 9:27 pm
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Liebensteiner says...



a beautiful bird,
soaring through the light blue sky,
suddenly shot down
LadyBug is the best frister ever <3
(everyone please know that she's the coolest goose you will ever meet)
(this goose blushes too much)
(lol imagine a blushing goose xD <3)
  





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Wed May 06, 2020 9:48 pm
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KahleneTenorio says...



Suddenly shot down
A sweet life begun yet ended soon
Is life only death?
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Wed May 06, 2020 10:01 pm
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whatchamacallit says...



Is life only death?
Passing in a blur of time,
fading into black.
My heart is a message in a glass bottle.
The cork is tangerine, so tangerine that i have mistaken it before
for a forgotten starfish limb.


  





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Thu May 07, 2020 3:29 pm
kattee says...



Faded into black
Spiralled into Oblivion --
'Tis here, Medieval!
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Thu May 07, 2020 4:05 pm
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'Tis here, Medeval!
A time of great invention-
And also Black Death.
‽‽‽‽‽‽‽‽‽
Life is short.
Reality is an illusion.
Eat the spicy nuggets.

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Thu May 07, 2020 4:48 pm
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The Black Death beckons
Its fourth cousin to follow.
"COVID, you're revenge."
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Thu May 07, 2020 4:58 pm
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looseleaf says...



CORVID, you're revenge
For all the dumb crap that the
Humans do daily

(i know that's not true, it sounded funnier in my head)
"How do I feel? I feel like a baked potato."
- Gale Hanson, 1988
  





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Fri May 08, 2020 1:18 am
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whatchamacallit says...



Humans, daily, are
inconceivably odd and
I just don't get us.
My heart is a message in a glass bottle.
The cork is tangerine, so tangerine that i have mistaken it before
for a forgotten starfish limb.


  





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Fri May 08, 2020 1:33 am
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Que says...



I just don't get us.
What is a relationship?
Anyway, miss you.
>Previously Querencia<

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Fri May 08, 2020 3:09 am
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kattee says...



In missing you, I
Fell in the abyssal of
My very own tears.
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Fri May 08, 2020 10:13 am
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TheCursedCat says...



My very own tears,
hold back and never fall out.
Wonder who'll fix it.
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