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Haiku Train



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Thu Jan 20, 2022 9:20 pm
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fatherfig says...



class presentation
from the whipporwills gathered
across windowpanes
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 2:24 am
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alliyah says...



Spoiler! :
class presentation -
eloquent introduction
computer on mute


~
across windowpanes
names traced in condensation
brooding other days
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 4:37 am
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Liminality says...



brooding other days
closed buds of bougainvillea
small and dark orange
she/her

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Fri Jan 21, 2022 11:02 am
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Hkumar says...



small and dark orange
Lantana flowers blossom
before first frost of fall
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 5:54 pm
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alliyah says...



before first frost falls
I count all autumn's blessings;
warmth for winter's chill
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 6:31 pm
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Hkumar says...



warmth for winter's chill
found in cold embrace of heart,
a sanctum of love
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 7:10 pm
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alliyah says...



A sanctum of love -
garden springing verdant prayers
from earth's cathedral.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 7:27 pm
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Hijinks says...



the earth's cathedral --
where the boughs of trees rest on
each other's shoulders.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sat Jan 22, 2022 7:18 am
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Starve says...



On each shoulder sit
multitudes of Genesis
(creation of life)
  





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Plume says...



(creation of life)
squalling infant, red, wet;
a mother's triumph
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Sat Jan 22, 2022 9:41 pm
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fatherfig says...



a mothers triumph
her bleached hands carress tabletop
childs appreciation
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2022 3:11 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Child's appreciation
Warm hands, smiling parents
A house full of love
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2022 9:17 pm
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yosh says...



a house full of love
sheltering the mountaintops
capped with fleeting snow
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2022 9:21 pm
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Hijinks says...



capped with fleeting snow
(my head, before i shake it
and put on a toque.)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Tue Jan 25, 2022 12:03 am
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Plume says...



and put on a toque,
she says, or else you'll get cold.
i leave, my head bare.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  








cron
here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a treee called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings