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Haiku Train



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Thu Jan 20, 2022 9:20 pm
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fatherfig says...



class presentation
from the whipporwills gathered
across windowpanes
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 2:24 am
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alliyah says...



Spoiler! :
class presentation -
eloquent introduction
computer on mute


~
across windowpanes
names traced in condensation
brooding other days
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 4:37 am
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Liminality says...



brooding other days
closed buds of bougainvillea
small and dark orange
she/her

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Fri Jan 21, 2022 11:02 am
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Hkumar says...



small and dark orange
Lantana flowers blossom
before first frost of fall
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 5:54 pm
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alliyah says...



before first frost falls
I count all autumn's blessings;
warmth for winter's chill
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 6:31 pm
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Hkumar says...



warmth for winter's chill
found in cold embrace of heart,
a sanctum of love
I only put my signature on big cheques.
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 7:10 pm
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alliyah says...



A sanctum of love -
garden springing verdant prayers
from earth's cathedral.
you should know i am a time traveler &
there is no season as achingly temporary as now
but i have promised to return
  





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Fri Jan 21, 2022 7:27 pm
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Hijinks says...



the earth's cathedral --
where the boughs of trees rest on
each other's shoulders.
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Sat Jan 22, 2022 7:18 am
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Starve says...



On each shoulder sit
multitudes of Genesis
(creation of life)
  





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Plume says...



(creation of life)
squalling infant, red, wet;
a mother's triumph
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Sat Jan 22, 2022 9:41 pm
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fatherfig says...



a mothers triumph
her bleached hands carress tabletop
childs appreciation
"i dont slay i slaughter, luke i am your father..." ~fatherfig
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2022 3:11 am
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WeepingWisteria says...



Child's appreciation
Warm hands, smiling parents
A house full of love
She/They/Fae

“the wist i knew would never allow a straight boy in their stories” ~Omni
“Hi Omni can I request wist get the role mom friend :]" ~winter
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :) <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2022 9:17 pm
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yosh says...



a house full of love
sheltering the mountaintops
capped with fleeting snow
they told me to never give up on my dreams.

so i took another nap
  





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Mon Jan 24, 2022 9:21 pm
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Hijinks says...



capped with fleeting snow
(my head, before i shake it
and put on a toque.)
When you're faced with something you don't understand, I think the most natural thing but also least interesting thing you can be is afraid.

-- Hank Green

they/them
(previously whatchamacallit and Seirre)
  





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Tue Jan 25, 2022 12:03 am
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Plume says...



and put on a toque,
she says, or else you'll get cold.
i leave, my head bare.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  








Bananas
— looseleaf